Welcome to the game. Please find below a bunch of comments for everyone. Please let me know when you have finalized your avatar, so I can review then and start the game.
cheers
For everyone
- Naming convention is ‘first name’ de or of ‘your manor,’ for example Bran of Tisbury. In the game, that’s what most NPCs will refer to you as (or Sir Bran or Tisbury maybe fondly as Maddog) and how you should introduce yourself. Therefore, modify your avatar name as you wish
- Finalize your player manor. If you don’t like Tisbury as a name, there are others
- Don’t forget your favored class and its bonus. Vigor effectively replaces Hit Points for the choice.
- I specified gauntlets, because they keep you ‘armed’ without a sword. Please specify on your sheets
- Please specify your armor check penalty and the skills that apply it to facilitate the first encounter when it won’t be applied
- Please put the following in your Avatar Gender – Wounds 26/26 | Vigor 9/18 | Hero 1 | Honor 5 | Challenge 1/1{spoiler=Stats}AC 16, T 12, FF 14; Fort +2, Ref +4, Will +3; Init +3; Perception +6[/spoiler} The point is obviously tracking consumable abilities and easy reference combat info
- Please review your fellow player’s characters. Maybe I missed some comments. You know each other fairly well.
- You start with a number of honor points equal to your Charisma score plus your character level.
Bran:
- Huntmaster requires you to specify animal type, right? I assume it is dog, but you could put it toward horse. Please specify.
- For your Provincial drawback, can you specify your religion? Pagan, I think.
Raedwald:
- Add in your background that your father had added you to his will with the earl of Salisbury.
- Please move your Special Abilities down, so I can review your most used stats earlier in your block
- Change Latin to Roman. The written is the same, but Romans speak a bastardized version of it.
Quintus:
- Influence trait, please specify your class skill.
- Please specify your skill ranks and list like other characters
- Alter your background to include that your character was willed Falt BEFORE Nonus died
- Your horse doesn’t get hero points
- Please add line spaces in your Background
Martin:
- Militia trait, please specify your class skill.
- I think your move is 30 from your special ability
- I chose your character, because you have a clear view of this character. However, I need more information in your background. Please specify how Martin learned his skills as a squire from a monastery. I think you infer that your family died at the Battle of St. Albans, but please make that clearer.