Neil Spicer Contributor, RPG Superstar 2009, RPG Superstar Judgernaut |
Paris Crenshaw Contributor |
Mikaze |
This was a great tale. I love the variety presented here. Something heartwarming...not what one would normally expect from a setting like Pathfinder. It made my day.
I don't think the setting as a whole discourages heartwarmingness.
But man I was surprised to see a story set in freaking Galt work out this way.
Very, very good stuff.
Not crying...
Matthew Morris RPG Superstar 2009 Top 32, 2010 Top 8 |
Kevin Andrew Murphy Contributor |
Glad everyone liked this so much. I don't always do happy endings, but in this case, I was very glad to be able to pull one off. Norret really deserved one.
Thanks everyone for all the comments, and also to Geraint for introducing me to a new idiom.
(Records "sweet as a nut" in mental lexicon alongside "pissah!" once awarded by a Bostonian poet....)
Zeugma |
I really enjoyed the ending of this story. It made me say "Awww." At the same time, I kept wondering what Norret will say when Orlin asks about his parents and his other brothers' fates.
After reading this story, I think the Final Blades are even more terrifying! They're like Purgatories with no way out, when the possibility of resurrection is a literal truth.
Kevin Andrew Murphy Contributor |
Alephtau |
Not to be negative, but a lot of this story did not make sense to me. The riddles were never explained that i could tell. Too many of the sentences were run-ons and hard to follow. Overall a good story, with a good twist on some staples of RPGs and a pleasing ending, but I had trouble following a lot of it.
James Sutter Contributor |
Not to be negative, but a lot of this story did not make sense to me. The riddles were never explained that i could tell. Too many of the sentences were run-ons and hard to follow. Overall a good story, with a good twist on some staples of RPGs and a pleasing ending, but I had trouble following a lot of it.
Don't worry about being negative. :) We play around with different styles in Pathfinder fiction, and it's important that people tell us both what they like *and* what they dislike, so that we can modify our material accordingly. With its bevy of awesome alchemical information and allegory, Kevin's story is on the denser end of the spectrum--for something equally fun but a bit more straightforward in its prose, might I recommend taking a look at Monte Cook's new piece, The Ghosts of Broken Blades?
Alephtau |
Thanks, I certainly shall read broken blades, but for now i am slowly reading the past stories first. I have been a fan of pathfinder for awhile now(wish i could say from the beginning, but sadly did not discover pathfinder until the tail end of Council of Thieves, and am slowly playing catch-up), and just recently got internet so i can catch up here too.
I have really enjoyed these stories, but for one thing it is hard on my eyes to read them on a computer screen. Is there by any chance plans to publish these stories( and possibly the pathfinder's journal stories from the adventure paths) in a short story book collection? That to me would be wonderful.
Erik Mona Chief Creative Officer, Publisher |
There are no concrete plans to do this now, but it wouldn't terribly surprise me if it happened some time in the future. If/when that does happen, though, it certainly won't be ALL the stories, so your best bet for completism is still reading them online.
We are in the process of converting all of the Pathfinder Journal entries and the web fiction to the ePub format so people can read them on iPads and other digital readers, but that's sort of a computer, so perhaps not what you're looking for.
It also takes a long time to convert the file formats and get them uploaded, so it's something we're doing in batches, as time allows.
Malachite Ice |
The ending is marvelous; after the various healing that Norret uses for himself we expect that whatever he choose will be to his own benefit - and of course, it is, in a way that we totally don't expect.
I have had the pleasure of encountering your fiction elsewhere, and I may say that this is one of your better pieces. It humanizes the endless tragedy that Galt embodies, and at the same time shows that even against such a festering pit of mutual betrayal - humanity and nothing more at its worst - one can pluck a rose.
Thank you for presenting that rose to us Pathfinder fans!
MI
Kevin Andrew Murphy Contributor |
Kevin Andrew Murphy Contributor |
This was the first web fiction I really read.
I now want to read more.
Well, I'd direct you over to "The Perfumer's Apprentice", the sequel to this story, but I think you read that one first.
For other Golarion fiction, I also did one of the chapters of "Prodigal Sons", the AP fiction for Kingmaker. And I also did a short story for Wayfinder #6.
And of course you can check my website for my other work (though I need to update the list).
Glad you enjoyed!
Cheapy |
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Cheapy wrote:This was the first web fiction I really read.
I now want to read more.
Well, I'd direct you over to "The Perfumer's Apprentice", the sequel to this story, but I think you read that one first.
For other Golarion fiction, I also did one of the chapters of "Prodigal Sons", the AP fiction for Kingmaker. And I also did a short story for Wayfinder #6.
And of course you can check my website for my other work (though I need to update the list).
Glad you enjoyed!
I have not yet read that one, but plan on it. To say this story inspired me is an understatement.
Kevin Andrew Murphy Contributor |
Kevin Andrew Murphy Contributor |
Kevin Andrew Murphy Contributor |