@Sundakan - if you can get it in this evening then - for you only - then fine. No guarantees on selection, obvs.
Fergus McHale was a simple man, making his living as a wildlife conservationist in his home country of Ireland. Unbeknownst to him, he carried the blood of the legendary Finn McCumhail in his veins!
In a chance encounter with a rabid bear, his abilities activated, growing him to monstrous size as he wrestled the rampaging beast down!
Fergus took this as a call to action, taking upon the mantle Hunter, and heading off to spearhead (no pun intended) the new Eagles initiative and protect his country from superhuman threats.
Str: 3
Sta: 3
Dex: 0
Agl: 2
Ftg: 0
Int: 1
Awe: 2
Pre: 0
Points on Abilities: 22
Defenses:
Dodge: 10
Parry: 10
Toughness: 10
Fort: 10
Will: 10
Points spent on defenses: 23
Advantages:
Accurate Attack
All-Out Attack
Close Attack (10)
Defensive Attack
Defensive Roll (7)
Evasion
Improved Critical
Improved Initiative (3)
Move-By Action
Power Attack
Precise Attack
Prone Fighting
Quick Draw
Takedown (2)
Throwing mastery (10)
Uncanny Dodge
Assessment
Eidetic Memory
Fearless
Instant Up
Second Chance
Hide In Plain Sight
Skill Mastery (Acrobatics, Perception, Athletics, Stealth)
Tracking
Points on Advantages: 49
Skills:
Athletics (10)
Acrobatics (10)
Stealth (10)
Perception (10)
Insight (10)
Points on skills: 25
Powers:
Gae Assail (Legendary Spear)
Damage 10 (10 points)
-Penetrating (10 points)
--Reach (1 point)
---Incurable (1 point)
----Weaken 10, Incurable, Broad: Weaken Abilities (21 points)
Alternate Effect:
Damage 10
-Penetrating 10
--Extended Range
---Incurable
----Weaken 10, Incurable, Broad: Weaken Abilities (21 points)
= 44 points
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Giant's Blood
Growth 8 (16 points)
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Speed 2 (2 points)
Leaping 3 (2 points)
Trackless (2 points)
Safe Fall (2 points)
Sure Footed 3 (6 points)
Points spent on powers: 74
Need to trim points (will probably have to drop Weaken, unfortunately, and some Advantages) and spruce up the backstory, but this is basically what the final product will be.
Realized I COMPLETELY forgot to add in "Easily Removable" penalties.
Str: 1
Sta: 0
Dex: 0
Agl: 0
Ftg: 0
Int: 1
Awe: 2
Pre: 0
Points on Abilities: 8
Defenses:
Dodge: 10
Parry: 10
Toughness: 10
Fort: 10
Will: 10
Points spent on defenses: 28
Advantages:
Accurate Attack
All-Out Attack
Close Attack (4)
Defensive Attack
Defensive Roll (7)
Evasion
Improved Critical
Improved Initiative (3)
Move-By Action
Power Attack
Precise Attack
Prone Fighting
Quick Draw
Takedown (2)
Throwing mastery (4)
Uncanny Dodge
Assessment
Eidetic Memory
Fearless
Instant Up
Second Chance
Hide In Plain Sight
Skill Mastery (Acrobatics, Perception, Athletics, Stealth)
Tracking
Points on Advantages: 37
Skills:
Athletics (10)
Acrobatics (10)
Stealth (10)
Perception (10)
Insight (10)
Points on skills: 25
Powers:
Gae Assail (Legendary Spear)
Damage 10 (10 points)
-Penetrating (10 points)
--Reach (1 point)
---Incurable (1 point)
----Accurate +6 (3 points)
Alternate Effect:
Damage 10
-Penetrating 10
--Extended Range
---Incurable
----Accurate +6 (3 points)
= 26 points - Easily Removable = 16 points
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Giant's Blood
Growth 4 (8 points)
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Speed 2 (2 points)
Leaping 3 (2 points)
Trackless (2 points)
Safe Fall (2 points)
Sure Footed 1 (2 points)
Points spent on powers: 40
Points fixed! Attributes made up for with training and a magic spear, should be fine.
Edit: Well, ish. I have some spare points now, but not time to fix them ATM.
How did you only spend 28 points on defenses? It looks like it should be 48.
Those totals include stuff like Defensive Roll.
GM-Shady like DeathQuaker alluded to above I'm also happy to resubmit an alternate character pitch if needbe.
Sundakan's Hunter shares some overlap with Eoten.
I've another idea: Rökfall (an elemental troll whose been hiding amongst the humans for centuries, but with superhumans taking more of a centre stage feels he can be "himself" for once).
More than happy to stat up if needed (am more sold on the game than any concept I pitch lol). He'd be far less a brick (so to speak) and more an all-rounder with elemental powers - less stepping on powerhouse submission toes.
Let me know what you reckon chief.
Cheers
Hi - am at work and was out last night (Civil War) so haven't had a chance to go through. Will definitely get back tonight with next steps.
GM-Shady like DeathQuaker alluded to above I'm also happy to resubmit an alternate character pitch if needbe.
Sundakan's Hunter shares some overlap with Eoten.
I've another idea: Rökfall (an elemental troll whose been hiding amongst the humans for centuries, but with superhumans taking more of a centre stage feels he can be "himself" for once).
More than happy to stat up if needed (am more sold on the game than any concept I pitch lol). He'd be far less a brick (so to speak) and more an all-rounder with elemental powers - less stepping on powerhouse submission toes.
Let me know what you reckon chief.
Cheers
My intention wasn't to step on anyone's toes, and you were here first. No need to change on my account. =)
No man - you weren't stepping on toes at all - even if Eoten's are big old lumps :)
Like I said I'm such a comics head that I've a bunch of concepts spilling around in my vault like brain lol.
Know it'll be up to GM-Shady, but I know from previous xp that having several similar characters oft means they don't make the cut or force the GM to make a hard(er) choice.
Simply voicing that I'd rather re-pitch if it makes life/choices etc easier (especially when I have plenty at hand).
OK, despite this being pretty niche the submissions were of an incredibly high standard. I've got a number of campaigns on here and this has been the most difficult one to pick for.
I'm going to go with the following.
- Black Dow/Eoten
- Vrog Skyweaver/Longbow
- Idiot Cube/Lightning Blade
- WhtKnt/Spellbound
- drbuzzard/Challenger
- DeathQuaker/Gracie
Can those people please wander over to the discussion thread I'm about to set up.
Really, really sorry I can't pick the others. If we have drop-outs - as seems inevitable at some point on these boards - I hope I can contact you to join at a later date.
Thanks again.