I will be clarifying the judging criteria and have a lot more information up about it shortly.
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Thanks for the feedback DM Asmodeus. I will begin going over my character today. Thanks for having a clear judging criteria, that's great!
Thank you Ember, most of the scored so far have been at quick glance. I will adjust as people update before final judgement.
Laial, let me assist you with the Slot Encumbrance System.
Total Inventory Slots
Unencumbered: 18
Encumbered: 36
Heavy Encumbered: 54
Slots Used: 37
Status: Heavy Encumbered
Penalty: Your speed drops by 20 feet and you have disadvantage on ability checks, attack rolls, and saving throws that use Strength, Dexterity, or Constitution.
Note: You need to drop 1 slot of items to get you down to encumbered instead of heavy encumbered.
Coin & Gems: 1 Slot Used
10gp
Armor Slots: 13 Slots Used (Weapons and armor are always readied.)
Chain Mail (11) * You had it listed as 4, which is for a chain shirt, chain mail is 11.
Shield (2)
Weapon Slots: 5 Slots Used
(Max Six - Weapons are always readied.)
Warhammer (1)
Light Crossbow (2)
20 Bolts (1)
Staff (1)
Readied Item Slots: 4 Slots Used
(Max Four)
Holy Symbol (1/5), Shark-tooth Necklace (1/5), Tinderbox (1/5) (1)
10 Torches (2)
Spell Component Pouch (1) * All spell casters require this slot.
Stored Item Slots: 14 Slots Used
Hunting Trap (5)
Travelers Clothes (1)
Bedroll (2)
Mess Kit (1/5) (1)
10 Rations (2)
Waterskin (1)
Hemp Rope (2)
Zatqualmie Burrwaddle, let me assist you with the Slot Encumbrance System.
Total Inventory Slots
Unencumbered: 12
Encumbered: 24
Heavy Encumbered: 36
Slots Used: 20
Status: Encumbered
Penalty: Your speed drops by 10 feet.
Coin & Gems: 1 Slot Used * You didn't show how much you had remaining but the minimum is 1 slot.
Armor Slots: 2 Slots Used (Weapons and armor are always readied.)
Leather (2)
Wepon Slots: 5 Slots Used
(Max Six - Weapons are always readied.)
2 Daggers (2/5) (1)
Rapier (1)
Shortbow (2)
20 Arrows (1)
Readied Item Slots: 4 Slots Used
(Max Four)
Pet Mouse, Map of City, Lock of Golden Hair, 10 Feet String, Bell, 5 Candles (0)
Thieves Tools' (1)
2 Flask of Oil (2/5), Tinderbox (1/5), (1)
Bag of Ball Bearings (1)
Crowbar (1)
Stored Item Slots: 8 Slots Used
10 Pitons 10/5) (2)
Hammer (1)
Hooded Lantern (1)
5 Rations (5/5) (1)
Waterskin (1)
Hemp Rope (2)
Note: Your plan to drop your backpack will not work under your current setup. A backpack contains 6 slots of items so you would relieve yourself of six slots of items (which btw you will need to choose which six are in it.) However that will still put you at 14, which is still encumbered. Re-figure your equipment and let me know if you are changing anything.
Dn Asmodeus, I was wondering if it would be ok for me to spend the 10GP I start with on the material components necessary for summoning a familiar, and then simply starting with the familiar already summoned?
I have updated my character sheet to your Preferred Statblock and I've converted my gear to the Slot Encumbrance system. I will still be continuing to work on the write ups for my background and personality.
Dn Asmodeus, I was wondering if it would be ok for me to spend the 10GP I start with on the material components necessary for summoning a familiar, and then simply starting with the familiar already summoned?
I have updated my character sheet to your Preferred Statblock and I've converted my gear to the Slot Encumbrance system. I will still be continuing to work on the write ups for my background and personality.
You start with your max starting wealth which in your case would be 4d4 x 10 gp which equates to 160 gp and then minus purchased equipment (you don't start with anything except what you purchase regardless of class and background.) since you are a wizard you will start with your spellbook and spell component pouch for free, if there is enough left over then you may summon a familiar.
I am giving starting wealth at max so there are at least some healing potions in the party to start.
Ember Draymon
Need a slight correction on your inventory.
Stored Item Slots: 12 Slots Used
Bedroll (2)
Mess Kit (1/5), Tinderbox (1/5) (1) * These are 1/5 slot items so the two take up a minimum of 1 slot, you could add 3 more 1/5 items here and still only take up the 1 slot.
Torch x10 (10/5) (2) * Torches are a 1/5 item so 10 of them take up 2 slots.
Rations x10 (10/5) (2) * Rations are a 1/5 item so 10 of them take up 2 slots.
Waterskin (1)
Hemp Rope (2)
Spellbook (1)
Black Ink (0) , Quill (0)
Common Cloths (1)
* Belt Pouch is a container so no need to list.
So your total slots used now should be 15.
Now if you drop your backpack in a pinch it would drop your slots carried by 6 so that would be a quick way to unencumber. But if you plan on doing that you need to list which six "stored" items are in your backpack.
Your speed is also missing from the top statblock
Whoops, somehow I read all the 1/5 as 1/2...
I respectfully will withdraw my application.
I respectfully will withdraw my application.
Noted.
Ok...I think I have it all properly formatted and added anything I was missing...so should be good (I hope!) Please point out anything I might have missed or made an error on and I will fix it! I really like the format for the characters...nice and simple!
Ok...I think I have it all properly formatted and added anything I was missing...so should be good (I hope!) Please point out anything I might have missed or made an error on and I will fix it! I really like the format for the characters...nice and simple!
A few minor things, Under proficiencies where it says one type of gaming set, you need to pick which type of gaming set.
Also I forgot you were a Goliath and have the powerful build feature. This raises your carrying capacity as if you were large sized. What that means in the slot encumbrance system is that all the numbers get doubled. So your carry limits should be unencumbered 50, encumbered 102, heavy encumbered 152.
Looks like you might be the party pack rat. lol.
Everything else looks really good. Score raised 20/24 now.
Ok...will go and fix those few items....and I sort of figured I would be carrying for the party..lol
Due to the clutter in this thread and unable to make things clear to new applicants in the original post I have created a new recruitment thread to better clarify and clean things up.
Please do not post in this thread any longer.
Post in the new thread linked below.
Thanks in advance,
DM Asmodeus