bugleyman Star Voter Season 6, Star Voter Season 7, Star Voter Season 8 |
Kiel Howell RPG Superstar Season 9 Top 32 , Marathon Voter Season 6, Marathon Voter Season 7, Marathon Voter Season 8, Marathon Voter Season 9 aka theheadkase |
james knowles Star Voter Season 6, Star Voter Season 7, Star Voter Season 9 |
As someone who doesn't subscribe/buy ever single Paizo product (oh to be single with no bills again), i live in constant fear that some aspect of my item duplicates something already published that I've never seen. The PRD goes along way towards helping in this regard, but it doesn't cover everything.
Magical_Beast Dedicated Voter Season 6, Star Voter Season 7 |
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I realized shortly after submitting that I had used passive voice in one section of my entry. Bolted upright from a deep sleep with that "Oh poop!" feeling when I realized it.
After reviewing so many items, including some really good ones, I realized that my item also is SIAC. I still think it is well-written and balanced, but bleh.
However, I am pleased to report that I am very inspired to put together some new items and really show my stuff next year.
Meh. Live and learn.
Magical_Beast Dedicated Voter Season 6, Star Voter Season 7 |
Although...
If you want to take heart regarding your perception of your item - check out the judges comments on the Wondrous Item for the eventual winner of RPG Superstar last year.
Raptoring Gloves. Weak Keep and two Rejects, with some notes about how it was not all that exciting and possibly SIAC.
So maybe not all hope is lost just yet. :)
Dennis Baker RPG Superstar 2010 Top 16, Contributor |
Dennis Baker RPG Superstar 2010 Top 16, Contributor |
Sean H Star Voter Season 6 |
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Next year I'll consider submitting a spray can that casts a spell on the subject...
Rainbow Sprayer
Aura strong illusion CL 13rdSlot none; Price 38,400 gp; Weight 1 lb.
Description
This garishly decorated spraycan is covered with vibrant hues spanning the entire rainbow. As a standard action the owner can point the spraycan in any direction and push down on the actuator to create a 15 ft. spray of colored mist which duplicates the effects of the color spray spell.
In addition, once per day the user can shake the can vigorously before spraying, creating a 60 ft. spray that instead duplicates the effects of prismatic spray. Once the can is used in this fashion, it's color spray ability also stops working for the rest of the day.
Construction
Requirements Craft Wondrous Item, color spray, prismatic spray; Cost 19,200 gp
cwslyclgh Marathon Voter Season 6, Marathon Voter Season 7, Star Voter Season 8 |
Deodorizer
Aura weak abjuration CL 5th
Slot none; Price 4.95 gp; Weight 1 lb.
Description
This unassuming tube of red and white painted metal has a small push down nozzle at one end. a character pointing the nozzle at himself and pressing down will be covered in a fine spary mist that makes the character undetectable by creatures with the scent ability for 1 hour.
Construction
Requirements Craft Wondrous Item, Non-detection, ; Cost 2.50 gp