The Pyramid of Shadows (Inactive)

Game Master PathlessBeth

mine would fear being utterly defeated or trapped with no way out

Vassekh fears the opprobrium of her own people and (of course) the perilous consideration of the dread githyanki lich-queen.

Background flavor completed, HP adjusted, equipment adjusted.

Definitely interested. I'm thinking something along the lines of an Enlightened Monk, raised in Sigil, but interested more in mysteries and the unknown.

Vassekh fears the opprobrium of her own people and (of course) the perilous consideration of the dread githyanki lich-queen.

Background flavor completed, HP adjusted, equipment adjusted.

Got my character's own name wrong. Yessai is the given name, Vassekh-Arokh is the clan.

my submission is taking a bit longer than anticipated, i hope i can make it in time (did you say when the recruitment ended?)

EDIT: actually, more done than i thought. I just need to select one feat, one trait*, and do my equipment.

*I have selected one trait, should i select another? I wasn't planning on taking drawbacks, but i might take just one drawback for another trait.

My character will be Gemheart, Forgeborn Aegis.

(did you say when the recruitment ended?)

I did not. I plan to leave recruitment open for at least a few more days, to give people time to finish. If more people express interest during that time, I might extend it a bit.

Other than advancing Githyanki cause, does she have any particular goals? Fears?

(That last question goes for everyone: what is your character afraid of?)

That's kind of a tough one. Dacka dacka's goal is easy: proving to his fellow dwarves that he is powerful enough to demand respect. His disadvantages are pride and power-hungry, so I'd say his fears were the opposite: being humiliated and being forgotten/ignored.

I'm having problems with how my smartphone is working with the board here. I may have to enter my character as one rather long message in this thread. Also, I can't "see" other people's character information that has been entered as part of their alias. Hopefully I'll get a reply in the website forum that will help me get this solved. If not, things may still be doable, just more of a pain than I thought they would be.

You might need to make sure you're in Tablet/Computer View instead of Mobile VIew?

My iPod spazzes out if it's on Mobile.

Tenro's submission.

Welcome Gemheart

Here's the current list of submissions - let me know if I missed anyone:

Midiotoziggeroto – Human Chaotic Wilder 4 (Gobo Horde)

Thomas of the Blue Blade - Half-elf Inquisitor 2/Soulknife 2 (Dalgar the Great)

Feoryn of Ironveil - Dwarf Alchemist (Mindchemist) 4 (Anya Gibson)

Dacka Dacka – Dwarf Monk (Zen Archer/Qinggong) 4 (Gavmania)

Vassekh-Arokh Yessai – Githyanki Direlock (Fear Eater) 4 (Oceanshieldwolf)

Gemheart – Forgeborn Aegis 4 (Tenro)

Rather interesting group ._.
I like.

Nice, varried group. A little light on healing but nothing a wand of CLW can't fix :)

Alchemists can make potions of Cure Light, can't they?

Yup - CLW is on the Alchemist's 1st level Formulae list...

Thanks, I don't have any of my stuff besides the laptop with me *le sigh*

But that handles the healing issues if the alchemist ends up in the party.

If the alchemist is in AND if he takes the infusion discovery. Otherwise his CLW only works for him.

She has that discovery (:

It played into her backstory so that's the first one she took.

I may have to break down and get to a computer in a library to properly update the "alias", but for now I'll try it this way. - Cutlass

Mundarion ir'Siannodel
Male elf rogue 2/ Wizard 2
CG Medium humanoid (elf)
Initiative +4
[+3 (dex) +1 (forewarned)]
Senses: low light vision, perception +11
[Perception includes +2 racial bonus and +2 for having his familiar in arm's reach. Does not include +3 on sight based and opposed perception checks in shadows and darkness and an additional +1 vs traps]

Defense
AC 17, touch 13, flat footed 14 (+4 mithral shirt, +3 Dex)
Hit points 8+3+4+3=18
Fort +0, Ref +6, Will +3; +2 vs enchantment
Defensive abilities; evasion; Immune sleep

Offense
Melee
Masterwork cold iron longsword +4 (1D8+1, 19-20/x2)
Masterwork dark wood club +4 (1d6+1, x2)
Masterwork mithral dagger +4 (1d4+1, 19-29/x2)
Ranged
+1 str dark wood composite longbow +6 (1D8+1, x3, 110 ft)
Dark wood club +6 (1d6+1, x2, 10 ft)
Mithral dagger +6 (1d4+1, 19-20/×2, 10 ft)
[Point blank shot not added in to ranged attacks. +1 to hit and to damage at ranges of 30 ft or less.]
Special attacks sneak attack (1d6)

Statistics
Str 12, dex 17, con 10, int. 18, wis 11, cha 10
Base attack +2; CMB. +3, CMD. 16
Feats: point blank shot, precise shot
Rogue talents & abilities: Trap finding, Evasion, Trap spotter
Skills
Acrobatics(R) DEX* +8
Bluff (B) CHA +7
Climb (R) STR* +6
Diplomacy (R) CHA +5
Disable Device (B) DEX* +12 [A]
Knowledge, Arcana (W) INT. +9
Linguistics (R) INT. +9
Perception (B) WIS +11 [notes in senses block]
Sense Motive (B) WIS +2 [B]
Sleight of hand (R) DEX +8 [C]
Spell craft (W) INT. +9 [D]
Survival (R) WIS. +2
Swim (R) STR* +6

(R) gets a rank in these skills when rogue levels increase.
(W) gets a rank in these skills when wizard levels increase.
(B) gets a rank in these skills when both rogue levels and wizard levels increase.
Trained skills rogue = 8 (class) + 4 (INT.) = 12
Trained skills wizard = 2 (Class) + 4 (INT.) + 1 (favored class bonus) = 7

An * after the key ability indicates an armor check penalty applies. Mundarion is wearing armor with an ACP. of 0, though would be subject to a medium encumbrance and an ACP. of -3 when wearing his bacpack.

[A] Includes +2 for having Masterwork thieves' tools, does not include an additional +1 vs traps.
[B] Includes +2 for having his familiar in arm's reach.
[C] could arguably get a +2 when he's using the skill to entertain an audience and has prestidigitation active.
[D] Does not include a racial +2 bonus when using this skill to identify items.

Languages, starting: Common (Khorvairen)#, Elven, Draconic, Gnoll, Goblin, Orc
Languages, linguistics: Abyssal, Celestial

And I can use a wand of CLW, and I have one in my inventory...

That's the basic crunch. Entering all this with a stylus on a smartphone is a pain. I'll skip the spells, the equipment and the familiar stats for now and get to more of the fluffy character stuff.

Mundarion ir'Siannodel hails from the country of Cyre on the continent of Khorvairen on the world of Eberron. He is a member of an Elven family that had been living in a forested part of the area that eventually became Core for the better part of two and a half millenia. Through time their culture slowly changed, rendering them more Coran than traditional Elven in outlook. Several elven generations ago one of Mundarion ' s ancestors was ennobled for service to the Coran crown gain in the area that the family had traditionally lived in as part of his demesne. It was not a particularly large or wealthy demesne, but it did guarantee that the area the family thought of as "theirs" would always be under their control. It also let them add the prefix ir' to the family name indicating nobility.

Mundarion is the fourth oldest of 5 children. He has two older brothers, an older sister and a younger sister. His father and eldest brother were killed fighting in the conflict that became known as the Last War. The second oldest brother had inherited and was running the family estate, serving the war effort in an important non combat role (overseeing production and distribution of healing kits and supplies. Mundarion ' s older sister had married a member of another elven noble family and given birth to a baby boy. Mundarion's youngest sister was still living at home, too young yet at the tender age of 75 to be allowed out on her own. Mundarion's mother had taken the deaths of her husband and first born son exceptionally hard and had withdrawn to live a life of seclusion on a small corner of the estate.

Mundarion entered the Royal Coran Army when he was 115 years old. The Last War had been raging for 70 years and there was no end to the conflict in sight. Given Mundarion's talents and abilities as an elf as well as his initial training as a rogue Mundarion was a natural for scouting assignments. Adding further training as a wizard specializing in divination and bonding an owl as a familiar helped him to become even better in that role. He rose slowly through the ranks largely because he was so good at what he did those he worked for didn't want to lose him to reassignment. After 23 years of service Mundarion transferred in to the elite Long Range Raiding Corps as a Captain. From then on he spent most of his time far behind enemy lines causing hate and discontent.

Mundarion was eventually promoted to major and became executive officer of one of the companies in the Corps. It was after Mundarion had been serving in the army for 30 years that disaster struck. The entire nation of Cyre was wiped out in a magical calamity that turned the area into a giant wasteland where the very rules of nature had changed. Mundarion and his company were initially spared when that happened because they were out on assignment. It was when they returned to what had been their home that they found things had almost literally gone to hell. Men who had been rock solid in battle their entire adult lives were reduced to tears. Some of them went mad. Others were killed by the new monstrous denizens and other unnatural hazards that had sprung up in the one area they had thought was "safe".

Mundarion struggled to hang on to his sanity and tried to maintain some form of discipline in his rapidly disintegrating unit. Then the visions started, becoming more powerful and frequent through time when Mundarion was trying to meditate. Seek out the place of power and Karavakos.

When Mundarion could eventually take it no more he ordered the few of his men that remained to do their best to make it to the far boundary of Cyre. The nation on the other side was one that Cyre had been allied with. Hopefully the men would eventually leave the area of effect of whatever had destroyed their land. Mundarion could not go with them. He had been compromised somehow and could not lead them effectively anymore.

Mundarion made his way as best he could with only his familiar for company to a shattered House Cannot workshop where the visions had shown him a damaged portal that sometimes functioned. Catching the portal at just the right time Mundarion went through it. And found himself in Sigil.

That was three weeks ago. Mundarion has been trying to figure out what happened to Cyre, what's going on in Sigil, and prepare for the journey the continuing visions are showing him that he will have to take.

Mundarion was horrified by what had happened to his homeland. He also feels guilty about having to leave his men. Mundarion is not at all happy with whoever this Karavakos is and their initial meeting at least is going to be interesting.

Other characters in Sigil might meet Mundarion as he's making the rounds using diplomacy and sense motive to find out information about Karavakos. Thus they might run across one another as they're trying to find the same information. Mundarion is also occasionally using Sleight of hand as a performance skill in order to make a little money on the side and meet people. One of the other characters might have caught one of his performances.

Ok, either something screwball is going on or there's something simple I'm missing entirely. I logged on with a real computer at the library and I still can't alter the information for my various aliases the way I want to. At any rate, at least I can now type on a real keyboard and not have to fight the smartphone "correcting" my spelling for the time being. Though I was slightly amused when "House Cannith" became "House Cannot" :-)

Gear and equipment loadout

light load < 44 lbs, medium load < 87 lbs, heavy load < 131 lbs

On person:

Explorer's Outfit [A] (free) 8 lbs
Mithral shirt 1100 gp 10 lbs
Thieves' tools, masterwork 100 gp 2 lbs
+1 STR darkwood composite longbow 530 gp 1.5 lbs
20 arrows 1 gp 3 lbs
Cold Iron longsword 330 gp 4 lbs
Mithral dagger 502 gp 0.5 lbs
darkwood club 330 gp 1.5 lbs
spell component pouch 5 gp 2 lbs
wizard's spell book 15 gp 3 lbs
cost for spells 910 gp 0 lbs
mirror, small steel, 10 gp 0.5 lbs
pearl of power, 1st level 1000 gp 0 lbs
wand of magic missiles 750 gp 0 lbs
familiar [B] 0 gp 0.5 lbs
Identification papers [C] 5 gp 0 lbs

total spent should be 5623 gp, total weight 36.5 lbs

[A] This is in fact the Royal Cyran Army's equivalent of battle fatigues. Anybody who had reasonable knowledge of Khorvaire would be able to recognize it as such and be able to read Mundarion's rank of Major off his insignia. People who were not familiar with Khorvaire might still figure out it's some sort of uniform because it does bear obvious (if somewhat "subdued") insignia, even if they don't know what the insignia mean.

[B] When his owl is riding on his shoulder.

[C] For flavor/fluff only. This is the equivalent of a passport that would be recognizable as such in Khorvaire.

Pack and contents

Backpack 2 gp 2 lbs
waterskin 1 gp 4 lbs
4 days trail rations 2 gp 4 lbs
grappling hook 1 gp 4 lbs
50 ft silk rope 10 gp 5 lbs
lantern, hooded 7 gp 2 lbs
40 arrows 2 gp 6 lbs

total cost and weight of pack and contents, 25 gp, 27 lbs

total encumbrance with backpack = 36.5 lbs + 27 lbs = 63.5 lbs, medium load, max dex +3, check penalty -3, speed 20 ft, run x4

Total gold spent = 5623 + 25 = 5648, 354 gp left over.

physical description:

Mundarion is 5 feet 6 inches tall and weighs 106 lbs. He has blonde hair, green eyes and is 145 years old. He normally wears his hair relatively short, only down to his shoulders and tied in back with a brown leather thong.

His explorer's outfit (Royal Cyran Army battle fatigues) consists of sturdy dark brown leather boots, leather breeches of a lighter shade of brown, a brown belt, a grey shirt, jacket and cloak. It also includes a grey leather hat with a wide brim. Holes have been punched through part of the brim so Mundarion's ears can stick through it. Mundarion normally wears his mithral shirt under his jacket so it would not normally be visible.

Mundarion wears his cold iron longsword in a crossdraw scabbard on his left hand side and his darkwood club on his right hand side. His mithral dagger is on a sheath that is stuck through the front of his belt and set up for a right hand draw. The dagger's hilt has been wrapped in leather so that with the blade in its sheath it is not obvious that it is made of mithral. He normally carries his longbow over his right shoulder next to his quiver. He wears his spell component puch on his right hand side behind the club. He carries the wand of magic missiles concealed up his left sleeve and the pearl of power in a jacket pocket that is buttoned shut. His money is distributed among various different pockets in his jacket and his breeches. His backpack completes the ensemble when he is carrying it.

Mundarion carries his spell book in a specially tailored pocket inside the back of his shirt that can only be accessed when he takes the shirt off. Given that he wears his mithral shirt over his grey shirt and his jacket and cloak over those items it would be almost impossible to tell he's carrying something that way. In general Mundarion's gear is well maintained and clean, as one might expect of somebody who can prepare mending and prestidigitation cantrips when he wants to.

Nightwing will normally ride on Mundarion's left shoulder and sometimes on Mundarion's hat. Nightwing occasionally flies off to perform various errands for Mundarion as well as hunting critters only an owl would enjoy. Part of Mundarion's trail rations include beef jerky, which MUndarion will share with Nightwing. But Nightwing normally prefers his meals freshly caught. Nightwing's plumage is in various different shades of grey, somewhat lighter on his stomach and around his eyes and darker elsewhere. Nightwing has a 24 inch wingspan, is 10 inches tall and weighs in at half a pound.

Owl Familiar - Nightwing

Tiny animal

Effective hit dice: 4

Init +3; senses low-light vision, perception +13

Defense:

AC 16, touch 15, flat footed 13 (+3 dex, +2 size, +1 natural armor adjustment)
HP: 9
Fort +2, Ref +6, Will +5
Special: improved evasion

Offense:

Speed 10 ft, fly 60 ft (average)
melee 2 talons +5 (1d4-2)
Space 2-1/2 feet; reach 0 ft

Statistics:

STR 6, DEX 17, CON 11, INT 6, WIS 15, CHA 6
feats: Weapon Finesse

Familiar's skills:

Acrobatics +8
Bluff +2
Climb +3
Diplomacy +0
Disable Device +7
Fly +7
Knowledge (Arcana) +0
Linguistics +0
Perception +13 (+4 racial modifier)
Sense motive +6
sleight of hand +5
Spellcraft +0
Stealth +22 (+ 4 racial modifier, +8 size modifier)
Survival +4
Swim +3

It's not clear from the stat block in the bestiary but it looks like an owl of the sort used as a familiar has 1 rank in fly. It is also not clear how much this familiar would weigh. After doing a google search I decided that a screech owl would be a reasonably close real world equivalent and took the size and weight figures for Nightwing off of that.

With a STR of 6 and tiny size Nightwing should have a light load maximum weight of 10 pounds.

Mundarion's grappling hook weighs 4 lbs and 50 feet of silk rope weighs 5 pounds for a total of 9 pounds. Thus for obstacles less than or equal to 50 feet tall or wide Mundarion should be able to have Nightwing place the grappling hook where it would work well.

Spells:

Cantrips received for free at start:

Resistance, Acid Splash, Detect Magic, Detect Poison, Read Magic, Dancing lights, Flare, Light, Ray of Frost, Ghost Sound, Mage Hand, Mending, Message, Open/Close, Arcane Mark, Prestidigitation. [takes up 16 pages in his spell book]

1st level spells received for free at start and level advancement:

Shield, Burning Hands, Magic Weapon, True Strike, Feather Fall, Endure Elements, Grease, Comprehend Languages, Magic Missile. [takes up 9 pages in his spell book]

1st level spells learned from scrolls:

Alarm, Endure Elements, Hold Portal, Protection from Chaos/Evil/Good/Law, Mage Armor, Mount, Obscuring Mist, Summon Monster I, Unseen Servant, Detect Undead, Identify, Floating Disk, Shocking Grasp, Color Spray, Disguise Self, Magic Aura, Silent Image, Ventriloquism, Animate Rope, Erase, Expeditious Retreat, Jump, Ant Haul, Dancing Lantern, Gravity Bow, Vanish, Abundant Ammunition

27 spells x 25 gp/scroll = 675 gp
27 spells x 10 gp/write in book = 270 gp
Combined total = 910 gp

Total pages used in spellbook = 27 + 9 + 16 = 52

Spell slots available and spells prepared while gathering information in Sigil:

Cantrips:
1. Detect Magic
2. Light
3. Mage Hand
4. Prestidigitation

1st Level Spells:
1. Shield
2. Expeditious Retreat
3. Gravity Bow
Divination. Comprehend Languages
Pearl of Power.

Welcome Mundarion.

@Oceanshieldwolf, I'm not acquainted with the Direlock class. Can they cast arcane spells?

So I spend all that time entering all that information as a series of messages, and THEN figure out how to access the profile section of an alias. Pardon me while I scream in frustration :-0

Oh well, if I get selected I'll come back later and do it "right". Until then I should be able to make normal game posts with the smartphone and then update the profile section of the alias later as needed.

Tenro/Gemheart: You appear to have a combat trait without a drawback, either drop the trait or add a drawback. Otherwise it looks fine.

Mundarion: Wow, that is a lot to write out on a smartphone! I like the idea of the Mourning creating a portal to Sigil, possibly hinting that its cause is somewhere outside of the Eberron universe, and possibly someone/something you could encounter later in the campaign. It looks like a strong submission.
Still waiting on Arknight.
Is Rysky still planning on submitting a character?

@Oceanshieldwolf, I'm not acquainted with the Direlock class. Can they cast arcane spells?

The Direlock does cast spells, but only up to fourth level (a la the Ranger).

@Oceanshieldwolf, I'm not acquainted with the Direlock class. Can they cast arcane spells?

Yup, as GMB said. But as a fear-eater, I don't really get any until 5th level. I usually just eat spells...

Characters of all classes can eat certain spells:)

O.O All I read was "Characters of all classes can eat certain spells."
Going back and reading, it doesn't sound THAT weird, but just seeing that part confused me, haha.

Oops. One last tweak. Add "Repair Light Damage" to the list of first level spells that Mundarion has in his spellbook. That will cost an extra 35 gold pieces and take up one more page. I seriously doubt that he will need that spell in this campaign, but his background is such that being able to prepare and cast that spell would have been a mandatory requirement for him.

Dacka Dacka wrote:

@Oceanshieldwolf, I'm not acquainted with the Direlock class. Can they cast arcane spells?

Yup, as GMB said. But as a fear-eater, I don't really get any until 5th level. I usually just eat spells...

Well, I have a wand of Mage armour and I need a friendly Mage to cast on me. If you've got that spell on your spell lists then you can cast it, otherwise I think only Mundarion can.

To hopefully clarify, in order to cast a spell from a wand a character needs to have the spell on his class spell list. Whether or not the character is actually high enough in level to be able to learn/prepare/cast the spell on his own is irrelevant. One of the dodges out there that has been quite common is to equip 1st through 3rd level Rangers with wands of cure light wounds. They can use the wands just fine even though they can't cast the spell until they hit 4th level. And of course, one could also have one's character make use magic device one of their trained skills.

Mundarion would have no problem using somebody else's wand to cast spells on them. The biggest problem would be that mage armor only lasts for 1 hour per level. As a buff before a fight that we know we're going to be getting into shortly it makes perfect sense. Trying to maintain it for the entire day just because is going to burn the wand up pretty quickly. Trying to get buffed in the middle of a fight after we've been jumped could present a minor tactical problem. Especially if Mundarion is on point and the other character is more towards the middle of the party.

So here is what I've seen so far, let me know if I missed anyone:

Completed submissions:
Midiotoziggeroto – Human Chaotic Wilder 4 (Gobo Horde)

Thomas of the Blue Blade - Half-elf Inquisitor 2/Soulknife 2 (Dalgar the Great)

Feoryn of Ironveil - Dwarf Alchemist (Mindchemist) 4 (Anya Gibson)

Dacka Dacka – Dwarf Monk (Zen Archer/Qinggong) 4 (Gavmania)

Vassekh-Arokh Yessai – Githyanki Direlock (Fear Eater) 4 (Oceanshieldwolf)

Gemheart – Forgeborn Aegis 4 (Tenro)

Mundarion - Elf rogue 2/ wizard 2 (Cutlass)

Expressed interest:
Contrariwise ??
DoubleGold ??
haruhiko88 - fighter?
Rysky ??
Mahorfeus - bloatmage/??
Tanga Frie ??
Spazmodeus ??
Arknight - enlightened monk?

still interested, just busy lately with work and family.
When's the cut off, Ben ?

still interested, just busy lately with work and family.

When's the cut off, Ben ?

My preference would be for all submissions to be in and complete (or nearly complete) and to reach a decision by the end of this coming weekend. I don't want to rush things, pbp is always slow, and I understand real life is important. On the other hand, there are already more than a full group's worth of submissions, and unless there are a bunch of applications coming in quickly, I think a week and a half is probably more than enough.

That's fair, I'll try to get mine in by then.

OK, so yeah. i have an interest in this campaign but i'm not sure if i can be involved daily or even more than Bi-daily, what with being in collage. however, my Tuesday/Thursdays are almost completely free. i have a 3rd lvl ninja character that i should be able to improve to the next level, the only thing is that it is a catfolk race, from the advanced races guide, so that could be a problem... do i need the character to be posted in these posts?

if you need to, email me about this

So, ends Sunday?

I won't be on much tomorrow at all or Sunday afternoon. My shop is running Bone Keep Saturday, I'm gonna die ._.

OK, so yeah. i have an interest in this campaign but i'm not sure if i can be involved daily or even more than Bi-daily, what with being in collage. however, my Tuesday/Thursdays are almost completely free. i have a 3rd lvl ninja character that i should be able to improve to the next level, the only thing is that it is a catfolk race, from the advanced races guide, so that could be a problem... do i need the character to be posted in these posts?

if you need to, email me about this

Catfolk isn't a problem, post your character here if you are interested.

cool cool.
De'arv'ki Paddfoot
Female Catfolk Ninja 4
CG Medium humaniod (Catfolk)
Initiative +4
[+4 Dex]
Senses: Low-Light Vision, Perception +9
[Perception includes a +2 racial modifier]

Defence
AC 19, touch 15, flat-footed 14 [+4 mithral chain shirt, +3 dex, +1 dodge]
HP 4+7+5+9 = 25
Fort +2, Ref +8, Will +1
Defensive abilities; Uncanny dodge, Cat's luck

Offense
Melee
Masterwork Wyroot Katana +5 (1d8+1, 18-20/x2)
Masterwork Cold iron Katana +5 (1d8+1, 18-20/x2)
Ranged
Masterwork Light crossbow +8 (1d8, 19-20/x2)
Special attacks
Sneak attack (+2d6)

Statistics
str 12, dex 19, con 12, int 12, wis 10, cha 14
BAB +3, CMB +4, CMD 18
Feats: Dodge, Rapid reload (L. crossbow)
Ninja abilities and tricks:
Rogue talent --> (Catfolk)Nimble Climber, Vanishing trick,No trace +1, Poison use, Ki pool: 4
Skills
Acrobatics DEX* +11 ACP
Climb STR* (R) +20 ACP
Craft (Alchemy) INT* +8
Disable Device DEX* +11 ACP
Disguise CHA* +9
Escape Artist DEX* +11 ACP
Perception WIS* (R) +9
Slight of hand DEX* +11 ACP
Stealth DEX* (R) +13 ACP
Swim STR* +8 ACP
(R) affected by a racial modifier of +8 for climb, and +2 for stealth, survival and perception

Total Skill Points = 36(class) + 4(favored Class)
Skills affected by armor check penalty are marked with ACP
Languages; Common, Catfolk, Elven

I'll have to submit the rest of her equipment later, i've got class just about now so no time left :/

The other thing is, am i allowed to use poisons? i've taken some skills to facilitate making them and i have poison use as a class ability.

Yes, poison use is allowed.

Mechanically it looks fine. What are its personality and backstory like?

Currently the backstory i'm working with is De'arv'ki came from a nomadic tribe of catfolk (not sure where from, my preferred setting is dragonlance, so i don't know that locations very well) who committed a crime for which she was expelled from the tribe. she gradually made here way to a larger, oriental town and became a ninja (since they are in essence a rogue archetype). because of this, she has a very withdrawn, bitter selfserving rogue character, with the classical feline contempt for all others. she speaks with a rasping, whispering voice because of her throat having being slit by a more capable mark she tried to rob at one point. she has trust issues because of the eviction from her tribe, which leads her to be very reserved in groups. thats about how far the backstory and personality has been written up

i'm thinking something along the lines of she then makes her way to sigil in order to find better marks of higher value to pickpocket, amongst other things.

i'll not be on till next week,
Est Solarus Oth Mithas, DMB

So my week has been busy and i spent most of my online time on... Other campaigns (playing a CL4P-TP from borderlands is FUN!)
Now i got time to finish up this submission and i intend to do it right! :)

Name
Midiotoziggeroto

Class
Male Elan Psion (Nomad) 4

Despite his high intelligence and respectable amount of skill points, he has few knowledge skills, since he is too young to know much. Instead, as he levels he will gain more, representimg him learning about the world. He also has a scary fast movement speed and quite significant power pool. This leaves him with plenty of options to explore and rather large potential psionicly wise.

This is for the Psion Nomad. I just cant decide between him aand the wild wilder so i will probably get both up :p
if i can only get 1 up or cannot get the wilder finished then consider this the default one :)

And here is the nomads crunch :)
It should be complete minus 2 traits and gear.
Now i believe i got enough done to be considered a complete submission, feel fee to critique it :)

Just a reminder that I'm still here :)