Kevin Andrew Murphy Contributor |
Mikaze |
Thanks for the kind words, folks.
I was very impressed by the Mwangi game product. Lots of great story hooks there, and Nantambu struck me as an interesting culture, well worth revisiting.
As for Bonali, I'd prefer to think that he eventually repaid Jamang in his own coin. :)
So a Mwangi-oriented novel is coming soon then? ;)
And is it wrong to hope the Bonali/Jamang conflict escalates to The Prestige levels across the Inner Sea?
Elaine Cunningham Contributor |
So a Mwangi-oriented novel is coming soon then? ;)
Not to my knowledge. It may be that Paizo has one in the pipeline, but if so, I'm not aware of it. All I can see with absolute certainty is that I'm not currently working on a Pathfinder story.
And is it wrong to hope the Bonali/Jamang conflict escalates to The Prestige levels across the Inner Sea?
That's a satisfying notion to comptemplate. :)
Elaine Cunningham Contributor |
Kevin Andrew Murphy Contributor |
Aaron aka Itchy |
I would also enjoy a rematch between Bonali and Jamang. I would like to see Bonali win, but not by Jamang's method. Jamang's conniving and scheming should be his own downfall with only a little encouragement from Bonali.
Or, even better would be if good advice from Bonali is interpreted by Jamang as political maneuvering so he does not follow it, which leads to his own downfall.
Mikaze |
I wish I had seen this earlier, but I'd definitely be interested in more stories following this one, either as a one-shot or a longer story.
Pretty partial to a longer format, or even a novel, since that would mean more background goodness for those of us interested in Nantambu. ;)
Also, go Team Bonali!
Aaron aka Itchy |
Perhaps I skipped over it, but where did illusions happen?
You did not skip over anything, Cheapy. This is the story of why Bonali decides to become an illusionist.
Last Paragraph:
"Master Oyamba, I am mindful of your desire that I learn the art of abjuration, but with your permission I would like to devote myself to the study of illusion. Perhaps knowledge of how falsehoods are told with magic might prepare me to better perceive the illusions built with words and deeds. That ability, I suspect, might hold me in better stead than anything else I might learn from Korvosa." [emphasis mine]
Elaine Cunningham Contributor |
I wish I had seen this earlier, but I'd definitely be interested in more stories following this one, either as a one-shot or a longer story.
Pretty partial to a longer format, or even a novel, since that would mean more background goodness for those of us interested in Nantambu. ;)
Also, go Team Bonali!
Thanks for the response, Mikaze. I'm leaning toward a short story set in the Acadamae.
I agree that a closer look at Nantambu could be interesting. At this point I have no plans to head in that direction, but I'd certainly read a story by someone who did! :)
Elaine Cunningham Contributor |
I would also enjoy a rematch between Bonali and Jamang. I would like to see Bonali win, but not by Jamang's method. Jamang's conniving and scheming should be his own downfall with only a little encouragement from Bonali.
Or, even better would be if good advice from Bonali is interpreted by Jamang as political maneuvering so he does not follow it, which leads to his own downfall.
You, sir, have a devious mind. :)
Aaron aka Itchy |
You, sir, have a devious mind. :)
innocently:Me?
I enjoy seeing stories where evil brings about its own downfall. It reinforces the "lesson:" be good because in the end, good conquers evil.
That's not to say that every story should be written to be a moral lesson, but most every story has a base level of morals that it conveys, and thus contains a moral message of some sort.
Okay, I'm starting to feel like the Duchess, so I'll stop now. And the moral of that is: "Take care of the sense, and the sounds will take care of themselves."
AAAHHHH!!!! *collapses weeping*
Set |
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I enjoy seeing stories where evil brings about its own downfall. It reinforces the "lesson:" be good because in the end, good conquers evil.
And yet, your scenario is even richer, in that, to defeat evil, good just has to stand back and generously offer it enough rope with which to hang itself. Self-conquering evil, the best kind.
If only it was considerate enough to clean up after itself.
Elaine Cunningham Contributor |
Ragadolf |
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Wow, I cannot believe I missed the comments section earlier.
(Time is my excuse, I usually just make time to read the fiction then move on to my work.) :(
I loved the story.
I have always enjoyed your characterizations. Deep enough for depth of interesting character development, not so deep as to leave the reader treading water trying to get to the story. (As this well-wrapped up single-chapter short story proves!) :)
Another vote for Yes, I would love to see a rematch between Bonali and Jamang.
Perhaps along the lines as mentioned above, where evil is self defeating. However, a story where Bonali learns simply not to be manipulated (at least not quite so easily) might be simple enough to prove Jamang's undoing as well.
Looking forward to it! :D
Oh that reminds me, I still need to go pick up Winter Witch!
,... <Starts packing his work stuff>
kojoidrissa |
Thanks for the kind words, folks.
I was very impressed by the Mwangi game product. Lots of great story hooks there, and Nantambu struck me as an interesting culture, well worth revisiting.
As for Bonali, I'd prefer to think that he eventually repaid Jamang in his own coin. :)
I finally got around to reading this, AFTER starting "Winter Witch". I'd only finished Chapter 2, "The Necromancer's Familiar", but that gave me ALL the context I needed to enjoy THIS work.
I'm looking forward to the rest of your novel. And I hope Godsrain is successful enough to get the Pathfinder Tales line re-started in earnest.