| James Walley |
The second sentence of the opening paragraph for Mythic Feats seems awkwardly worded to me.
"These feats can be selected only as part of the mythic character's advancement- not as part of the character's normal advancment or in place of a bonus feat."
The second part of the sentence seems quite fine.
The first part, I think would change for the better by making it read "character's mythic advancement" rather than "mythic character's advancment". I think this because every character becomes a mythic character as soon as they ascend. Any advancement from that point along any progression line is that "mythic character's advancment". A "character's mythic advancment" separates the progression modes automatically and is better supported by the remaining text of the sentence.