Lilith |
So I got my latest AP from Paizo today. I was happy to get it but very dissapointed my copy of Wayfinder was not in it. I was under the impression they were supposed to ship with our AP order. Did I misunderstand?
There are a few more ducks that I need to get into a row for this. Trust me, it's at the top of my to-do list.
Wicht |
Wicht wrote:So I got my latest AP from Paizo today. I was happy to get it but very dissapointed my copy of Wayfinder was not in it. I was under the impression they were supposed to ship with our AP order. Did I misunderstand?There are a few more ducks that I need to get into a row for this. Trust me, it's at the top of my to-do list.
Completely understand. I had just thought it was done and had high hopes for getting it. I'll be patient. :)
Kajehase |
Feel free to give some feedback on my Milani-article once you've read it. I've even been optimistic enough to create a spanking new thread here for the purpose.
Wicht |
Feel free to give some feedback on my Milani-article once you've read it. I've even been optimistic enough to create a spanking new thread here for the purpose.
What I would like to hear feedback on is the recipes. :)
Has anyone attempted to make any of them, either for a gaming night, or just to try out?
Though feedback ont he other articles would also be instructive. What did people like, what did they not?
Neil Spicer Contributor, RPG Superstar 2009, RPG Superstar Judgernaut |
I'm curious if anyone's still reading along with the "Greenhorns" story. We've done three installments of it now and I think Trevor is swiftly taking it towards its conclusion. Presumably, he, Jonathan, and I would try and knock out another one for Wayfinder #4, but if folks have lost interest in it, I'd hate to keep taking up space when there's so many other authors wanting to submit something. So, let us know if they're still enjoyable.
Kajehase |
Kajehase wrote:Feel free to give some feedback on my Milani-article once you've read it. I've even been optimistic enough to create a spanking new thread here for the purpose.
What I would like to hear feedback on is the recipes. :)
Has anyone attempted to make any of them, either for a gaming night, or just to try out?
Though feedback ont he other articles would also be instructive. What did people like, what did they not?
I'm not much for doing things in the kitchen, but I can ask my brother the chef to take a look at them next time he's home from Corsica (which might be around Christmas or so, but what the hey).
Guy Humual |
Oh no! The edits.
The 20% pesh/ qat solution was in there as an homage to Arthur Conan Doyle. Why take it out?
Not huge problems, everything else looks very good, but I am curious why those changes were made.
Tarren Dei RPG Superstar 2009 Top 8 |
Here's a larger version of the Diamond Academy map. I wanted to make it high res enough that it would be decent at scale but my computer is too lame.
Koldoon |
Oh no! The edits.
** spoiler omitted **
Not huge problems, everything else looks very good, but I am curious why those changes were made.
1 - I assume "the" got nixed in layout for some reason, as it was not pulled out in editing, at least not in my copy.
2 - "20%" got cut as feeling anachronistic and unnecessary. The problem with throwing homages in your work is that you rely on the editor either missing the reference entirely or catching the reference and not caring enough to take it out. I didn't catch the Conan Doyle reference (I'm a Poirot man), and, not seeing it, didn't feel the percentage conveyed enough extra information to be left in. To me, it felt like it compromised the flow and so out it went.
3 - The time frame prevents proper editing. Really you should be reviewing the edits and discussing problems with the editor, but there isn't time for that. Also, you need to be realistic... sometimes issues, like the missing "the" crop up. Sometimes it's the fault of the editor, sometimes it happens in layout... sometimes you accidentally deleted it yourself rewriting a line for the 500th time. But if the worst thing you can say about an edited piece is "I think it's missing a 'the'" then you got very lucky.
Guy Humual |
** spoiler omitted **
Thanks for the feedback Koldoon! The title change did upset me a bit but knowing that it might not have been an intentional change does make me feel better. Sherlock liked a 7% solution and so I thought Boswic should have a similar solution.
All in all not major complaints, and I want to thank you for taking the time to edit for Wayfinder, and taking the time to explain things for us pushy/picky writers :D
Joe Wells RPG Superstar 2010 Top 32 |