These are definitely an improvement to the Outer and Esoteric dragons, they aren't just the dragon repainted. But it's still depressing hom much potential these had. Dragons based on the planes, the very idea sounds exciting. They could have been breathtakingly beautiful/cool and unique. Not to be rude, but the art seems a bit...uninspired. :/ There are several fantastic dragon "cousins", but the True dragons get so little love.
I am a huge fan of the Locust from the Gears of War video games, and I have been thinking that they could be amazing(albeit odd) creatures in a fantasy setting, almost akin to a subterranean orc or similar creature. I have been so excited about this, that I'm going to run a Pathfinder session involving the Locust along with many of their creatures but scaled down to the less-technologically-advanced world of the typical Dungeons and Dragons/Pathfinder setting, as soon as I stat them all up.
My mind is running rampant with ideas at this point, but does anyone have any suggestions or input?
I have always thought of Dark Folk being -2 Charisma, considering they seem to be a tad bit on the xenophobic side.
Also I have to say...thank you so much for doing an adventure using the Dark Folk/Dark Ones. They have always been my absolute FAVORITE race and seems to be one of the most underrated races.