| Darth Maximus |
Ships Wizard, reporting for duty!
I would like to apply with Loges, if approved.
I also applied with Virgil, but I like this one better.
I do allow multiple submissions, yes. I shall add it to my list.
A diviner is an interesting choice, I don't see too many of those played. That drawback is rough, though. You sure you're comfortable with it?
| Buhayra Sarraf |
The Ten-Minute Background
Step 1: Write 5 background and concept elements that you feel are important to your image of the character. These can be a concept overview, a list of important life events, a physical description, a personality profile...whatever you need to get an image in your mind. 5 is just a minimum...more elements are encouraged!
(1) Buhayra is a tall woman with skin the color of tropical waters. White waves are tattooed from her cheekbones down her torso and onto her legs and arms. The tattoo seems to stretch the length of her body and as she moves it seems to ebb and flow like the tide coming in under a noonday sun. Her darker blue hair is evocative of an undersea cliff, dropping into unfathomable depths. A hint of a smile often finds its way to her lips, or glinting within the depths of her eyes.
(2) Buhayra has a quiet and otherwordly sense of humor. She often takes advantage of others lack of knowledge about her heritage to misinform and ridicule. "My blood is seawater...Undines don't sleep, instead our consciousness returns to the ocean depths...If you keep looking in my eyes while we swim down you'll be able to breathe water. "
(3) She doesn't know where in her genealogy the influence of the sea came into the tree, or how it has given here such wonderful powers. Nevertheless, she is grateful. To her mind there is no greater joy than floating in the ocean with unknown depths beneath unless it is using the power of the waters to bring someone back from the brink of death.
(4) One of the most formative moments of her youth was when a boy with a crush on her went out with the pearl divers to impress her. Trying to find the best pearl to give her as a gift, he stayed under too long and was brought back to shore unconscious and barely breathing. The guilt she felt overwhelmed her so that water began to bead and drip from her fingers, hands, and arms. Embracing the youth she felt an energy surge out of her like a tidal wave. Suddenly the boy gasped and coughed up have a lung of the bay. This was the first time Buhayra's powers manifested themselves.
(5) The longevity of undine life has worn slightly on Buhayra. The young boy she saved in her teen years has since married, had children and grandchildren, and is now living out the sunset of his life. Meanwhile, Buhayra is as youthful as a 20 year old human. As such Buhayra has started seeking out the friendship and companionship of longer lived species such as elves and gnomes.
(6) Buhayra asked her father years ago about her name. She was told that it is a travelers blessing in an ancient language. It apparently means 'calm seas'
Step 2: List at least two goals for the character. At least one of these goals should be one that the character has, while another should be one that you, as a player, want to see developed over the course of the game.
(1) Having mastered the basics of her abilities, Buhayra is ready to explore her powers further. She feels a potential wellspring within her and is convinced there is untapped potential there.
(2) I look forward to exploring the potential of a kineticist as I have not played one before.
Step 3: List at least two secrets about your character. One is a secret the character knows, one is a secret that involves him but that he is not actually aware of yet.
(1) Buhayra is slightly scared of her powers. Everyone around her calls them a blessing, but with that untapped potential she senses a destructive power as well. She is somewhat worried that if she puts cracks in the dam she may not be able to hold back the dangerous power it is holding back.
(2) A human cult worshipping Charon have become obsessed with gathering items of power to enhance Charon's influence within the water domain. They have become aware of Buhayra's water powers and believe her to be a sign and emissary from Charon. Unbeknownst to her the seek to insinuate themselves into her life and bring about more power to their diety and his favor.
Step 4: Describe at least three people that are tied to the character.
(1) Tomas Thornbrook - This 80 year old human was once a teen boy with an infatuation that nearly ended his life. While he is know nearly at the end of his life Tomas and Buhayra are still the best of friends.
(2) Shahera - This tiefling bar maid has been serving at the local watering hole for years. Recently she has become involved with the cult of Charon and now hopes to bring Bihayra into their circle to advance herself.
(3) Bartok Greenskin - The captain of the last vessel Buhayra served on, this half orc became fond of her and hopes to pursue a romantic involvement of the opportunity arises.
Step 5: Describe three memories, mannerisms, or quirks that your character has. They don't have to be elaborate, but they should provide some context and flavor.
(1) Buhayra is sly and a trickster. She enjoys practical jokes, but sometimes takes them to far.
(2) When healing someone of operating Buhayra mutters to herself in Aquan. She hasn't told anyone else, but she is reciting children's stories and nursery rhymes because it helps to calm her emotions.
(3) Buhayra had never felt emotionally attracted to anyone. She finds people pleasant, but romantic advances to be of putting. She will often work to make a courting suitor see her as a friend instead.
No writing sample this time. The previous one showed I can string words together. That was the point.
| Urgan Legsnapper |
Classes/Levels Druid (Kraken Caller) 1
Gender- male
Size- medium
Age- 20
Racial Abilities
Darkvision, Toothy, Intimidating, Orc Blood, Weapon Familiarity
Alignment- CN
Deity- Besmara
Languages- Common, Orc, Druidic
Strength 13
Dexterity 12
Constitution 14
Intelligence 10
Wisdom 18
Charisma 10
Traits- Besmara's Blessing- You gain a +1 trait bonus on Perception and Profession (sailor) checks. In addition, once per week you can reroll a Profession (sailor) check and take the higher result (you must announce that you are using this ability before the results of the check are known).
Besmara's Strength- The Pirate Queen sometimes answers your calls when you tread dangerous waters. Once per day when attempting a Swim check, you can treat the water as if it were one category calmer (as if stormy water were rough water or rough water were calm water).
Fort +4, Reflex +1, Will +6
HP 10
AC 15 TAC 11 FF 14
Scimitar +1 1d6+1
Dagger +1 1d4+1
Skills: Perception +9; Heal +8; Profession (sailor) +9, Knowledge (Nature) +4
Feat- Keen Senses
When he was ten, Urgan was jumped by a group of older boys. Anbin, local halfling druid, selling her healing salves broke up the fight. She brought him back to her hut a few miles out of city. Once healed, Urgan started his training in the druidic and healing arts. On multiple occasions when try to set a patient's leg, Urgan just ended up snapping the bones more.
Once his apprenticeship was finished, the call of Besmara was strong so Urgan headed back to Port Peril.
| hustonj |
Here's what I see on the list so far, in alphabetical order by player handle, updated after 2230 on Sunday . . ..
Andrea1 - Liz Ardoc - human alchemist
Buckshot Bob - Grulyn Ironfoot - dwarven fighter
C B 380 - Rigel Pordyras - human cleric of gozreh
Chester Copperpot - Galdon Zindeep - grippli deep shaman
Conman - Valk Grof'Ker - half-orc ranger (falconer)
Cuhculainn - Kehlysch - gillman aberrant bloodline sorcerer
Dorian 'Grey' - Loges the Wise - human diviner
Dorian 'Grey' - Virgil Geryon - half-orc mesmerist
Fenris105 - Nathan Tidesbane - gillman kineticist (hydrokineticist)
Grimsnik - Urgan Legsnapper - half-orc kraken-caller druid
Grumbaki - Galessa - aasimar lore psychic searcher oracle VMC Magus
hustonj - Terry of Quent - half-elf unchained rogue (pirate)
Nairb the Grey - Aloch Suryo - human brawler - "Fluff"
Nairb the Grey - Buhayra Sarraf - mistsoul undine water kinetic chirurgeon (kineticist) - "Fluff"
Odentin - Tamesis Kieran - tiefling eldritch archer kensai
Odentin - Tamesis Kieran - tiefling kensai
Oniwaban - Blurgol - grippli waves oracle
Oniwaban - Rungus - half-orc fighter (corsair)
Sir Longears - Baolus Yeralzery - human unchained rogue (makeshift scrapper)
theasl - Madiya - bonuwat warpriest
Vanulf Wulfson - Randall McNally - varisian bard (sea singer)
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Kevin O'Rourke 440 - ?
Profession Smith 6 Ranks - Capricia Belacrest-Maxeme - human reworking towards Rondelero Swashbuckler? - Level 4 Rondelero Fighter currently
ShadeKyubi - ?
Shalm - witch
Edit:
So 17 unique players submitted 21 character variants.
5.5 primary arcane casters (Those silly shamen . . ..) - 3 "normal" races
6.5 primary combatant classes (Warpriest, natch.) 5 "normal" races
~6 primary divine casters (Shaman and Warpriest . . ..) 3 "normal" races
3 primary skill/support classes - ALL 3 "normal" races
| Nairb the Grey |
Same...much sameness.
Also, not sure who I would preRP...I like Aloch and Buhayra. I know who I would prefer to play, but the GM might go in a different direction and pick the other one or neither of them.
I would prefer to stay at my current level of excitement and investment until the results show up.
| LizArdoc |
I've read posts here about how the rum rules in the original book are pretty nasty and there is an alternate set that makes sure the crew isn't dead a few weeks out. Might be worth checking out.
Plus when this AP was released, there was a huge interest but few got off the boat or finished the book. So those selected should make a plan.
| Darth Maximus |
Alright! Capricia is actually the last submission, as the other 3 people who hadn't posted yet pulled out (via PM). I'm going to do one last sweep and deliberate, and will have the final list posted later on tonight.
A note to everyone who doesn't get selected: PbP games have a notoriously high dropout rate. While I hope and pray that the selections I'll make will stick, I also hope that the rest of you will be willing to jump in as alternates, should the worst happen (God forbid).
| Darth Maximus |
Liz: Go ahead and burn it down. Sorry.
The chosen few are, in alphabetical order:
Baolus Yeralzery
Buhayra Sarraf
Galessa*
Kehlysch
Madiya
Sven Olaffson*
Tamesis Kieran (eldritch archer)
*I was honestly torn between your two submissions. I, personally, like Sven more, but you said you think Galessa is better. Either one will fit with this party, so go ahead and pick which one you want.
To everyone else: We had some REALLY good submissions. This was a lot harder than I expected it to be. I do hope you'll consider being an alternate, should something happen, God forbid.
To those who were chosen: Congratulations. The Discussion thread will be up momentarily, so go check in there.