
Lobolusk |

my paladin/gunslinger creed is below.
bring justice to the unjust
bring mercy to the unmerciful
bring law to the lawless
bring punishment to the deserving
Bring healing to the broken
bring help to the needy always destroy evil, once the world is cleansed of evil we can lay down our guns.
you shall give a man one chance to change, by showing him mercy, if he choose not to. You show him the error of his was by the grit of your soul and the guns in your hand.
let my guns always be a light in the dark,
evil shall fear the guns of my hand, for these are the guns of my father and his father before him
I will always remember the face of my father, I will always remember the light that must shine from me either by my fathers guns or my beating heart.
I will remember the face of Arthur Eld the First Gunslinger. As he brought order the chaos with the force of his will and the sound of his guns so shall I.
I will remember the face of my father.
any suggestions? is this lawful goof enough?

Lobolusk |

You listed "I will remember the face of my father" twice... well, the first time it's listed as "I will always remember the face of my father", but that's the same thing, isn't it?
I'm not sure I understand the point of the repetition there.
Its a creed , remembering the face of your Father is the most important thing. plus it is a reoccurring theme in the Gunslinger Novels. so I put it twice.