I would appreciate some criticism


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I have written an campaign to completion. Of course, this is supposing that all player characters don't try to get crazy with their role playing. There is four travel areas/towns, two dungeons, as well as an overlying plot line that the players will uncover as they progress. Since the basic outline of what I am assuming will be a level one to epic level campaign is completely written, I was hoping for some feedback, constructive criticism, and someone to tell me if something is completely ridiculous or not. Feel free to message me since I have no idea how to add attachments to this post. As well as the complete file is almost 185 pages. If anyone has the spare time or desire it would be greatly appreciated. If I am allowed to post my actual email address within this post someone just let me know and I will add my email address so that any who have the desire may contact me directly.

P.S. The reason I am seeking this assistance is that this is my first ever campaign that I have written from scratch, with no primer to go off of, as well as being a first time GM, and been on hiatus as a player for almost ten years.

Thank you in advance.


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Wow. But my advice is don't. Seriously. Put that wonder aside. Buy a PF adventure. Run it for at least a few months.

Then, go back and read your campaign with the eyes of a DM.

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