
Kajehase |

Kajehase wrote:You won't see us going away with your things!And another one I know won't be used (uses "Worldwound"), and sounds a bit like something else...
The Worldwound Redemption
Edit: *grumbles* Bloody dragon ninjas!
Actually we're just humouring you so you won't start demanding we return all the stuff we stole in 1654-57 and 1701-1706.

Evil Lincoln |

I doubt I'll offer a suggestion that would accepted whole, so I'll just give you my thoughts and hope they inspire you.
What bothers me about the working title is the word "Crusade", which stems from "the cross" etymologically. I know that won't be how most folks interpret it, but... maybe we can work with that.
Is there any kind of symbol that all in the Mendevian Crusade share? Are they guaranteed any rights at home, as under the Truce of God in the historical crusade? Is it chiefly the Will of Iomedae that this be undertaken?
Recall that historically, the word crusade wasn't used until long afterward. Most knew it simply as a "Holy War", a term that can be applied here, I think. If "Holy" works for a weapon property...
There's always the holy avenger — totally iconic, and I hope there's one in the AP somewhere... I'd have it be a sort of "sword of mars", "spear of destiny" type weapon that once found, turns the course of battle.
It's a shame you already have a book called "Plague of Shadows"... Deskari could certainly lay claim to the term "Plague". A Plague of Evil, maybe.
The AP isn't the whole crusade... I presume that the PCs will not be sealing the worldwound shut at the end, but making progress against some notable demon lord. Therefore, you may want to look at some war history and choose a term that describes the level of engagement as a subset of the whole crusade that you desire. Does it culminate in a siege? Where?
Are the players affiliated with any specific organization or cause?
After all that stream of consciousness, which I hope is helpful, I will end on one, concrete suggestion:
Perhaps a classic pulp title: Against the Locust King

Drejk |

Drejk wrote:Actually we're just humouring you so you won't start demanding we return all the stuff we stole in 1654-57 and 1701-1706.Kajehase wrote:You won't see us going away with your things!And another one I know won't be used (uses "Worldwound"), and sounds a bit like something else...
The Worldwound Redemption
Edit: *grumbles* Bloody dragon ninjas!
You did take something in 1701-1706? I thought it were Russians... It's hard to keep track of things such like that.
Soo, maybe Stolen Grace or Undeserved Mercy

Sinatar |

Rise of the Demonblight Crusade
Rise against the Demonblight
"Rise" seems like a good word to reflect the redemption theme, but I can't think of a good fit for "good guys" or "lots of demons" other than "Crusade" or "Demonblight"...
... but something that like that in place of "the good guys' redemption theme against lots of demons."
EDIT: Crusaders' Rise against the Demonblight
*shrugs*

Evil Lincoln |

Rise of the Demonblight Crusade
Rise against the Demonblight
"Rise" seems like a good word to reflect the redemption theme, but I can't think of a good fit for "good guys" or "lots of demons" other than "Crusade" or "Demonblight"...
... but something that like that in place of "the good guys' redemption theme against lots of demons."
Or Ride. Crusade says cavalry to me.
The Charge of the ... is also a good formulation.

Kajehase |

Sinatar wrote:Rise of the Demonblight Crusade
Rise against the Demonblight
"Rise" seems like a good word to reflect the redemption theme, but I can't think of a good fit for "good guys" or "lots of demons" other than "Crusade" or "Demonblight"...
... but something that like that in place of "the good guys' redemption theme against lots of demons."
Or Ride. Crusade says cavalry to me.
The Charge of the ... is also a good formulation.
The Charge of the Light Brigade :D (A.k.a. PCs, be afraid, be very, very afraid.)

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Is there a commemoration or battle cry? "For the Inheritor!" or the like?
Y'know, there actually is. Can't look it up at the moment, but it basically went "For victory, for the heart!" which has multiple meanings. There's what it means in the idealistic, symbolic sense. And then there's the literal meaning, where Iomedaeans are expected to aim for the heart to try and ensure a swift, relatively painless death when death is what they have to deal.
I get the feeling both takes on that saying are going to get a lot of milage in this AP, what with the redemptive aspects and the vicious throwdowns that are certain to occur.

Orthos |

Evil Lincoln wrote:Is there a commemoration or battle cry? "For the Inheritor!" or the like?Y'know, there actually is. Can't look it up at the moment, but it basically went "For victory, for the heart!" which has multiple meanings. There's what it means in the idealistic, symbolic sense. And then there's the literal meaning, where Iomedaeans are expected to aim for the heart to try and ensure a swift, relatively painless death when death is what they have to deal.
"For Thy Heart, For Thy Heart..."

Zaister |
Some titles that came to my mind:
Crusader (short and simple, like Kingmaker)
Threshold of the Abyss
A Light into the Darkness
Against the Demon Horde
Salvation of Sarkoris
Redemption & Deliverance

Zaister |
Kajehase wrote:Wonder what "Deus Vult" or ("Iomedae Vult" on Golarion) would be in Old Taldane? ;)I know what it'd be in Arabic, but yeah...
"Insh'Allah," I guess.

Hitdice |

What ever you call it, it's just gotta have Worldwound in the title. Don't be ashamed of your own intellectual property. Speaking as a customer who is not all that emotionally invested in Golarion, if you try to sell me something about a generic name, it'll get lost in the shuffle, but even I recognize the Worldwound as a location (well, an imaginary location, but, y'know).
I mean, no one was ashamed to use the word shackles in Skull & Shackles, right?