This is the first adventure I've ever GMed, and i thought it went well. issues with balance and grind as others have pointed out are present, but not overly glaring. My players enjoyed it and i think the overall story of the AP is really good, and I'm looking forward to continue through the rest of it.
Overall everything here is excellent as usual, although I'm a bit annoyed that it misses
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Mengkare
. Seems like a major character to seemingly completely forget, and its very annoying to have nothing to use for him. thats whats keeping this from 5 stars.