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I read the first 60 pages last night and I really like it.
Kudos for a well written scene,
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Very well done considering how melodramatic and clownish her emotions could have been written.
when the mother holds the Pathfinder's map for an emotional moment and throws it in the fire.
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Also, clever gimmick with
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Consider that stolen for many of my Homegames to come. the doll fetishes with no eyes.