I need optimization (Kinda) and backstory (Definitely) advice


Advice


in a future carrion crown campaign. i need help designing a roguish character. i want to be a decent trapfinder, but i don't want to suck at combat.

1st level 25 point buy, 4 traits maximum starting gold. no evil alignments.

allowed books are Core, APG, UM, UC, DSP Psionics Unleashed and ohd planetouched races (aasimaar, tiefling, fetchling, genie kin etc), and familiars/animal companions from bestiaries 1-3.

race/class variants with flavor pertaining to guns, siege weapons and the orient are banned. (Tien humans are fine) as are monstrous or subterranian races (like goblins, orcs, and drow)

the preferred race is a female human (Tian ethnicity) and will be going by the name Akane Saitou.

i also need help tying an appropriate backstory to professor Lorrimor and help on coming up with how not to sexualize this character.

the reason i didn't do it on my real account is because i don't want unwanted attention and wish to start over.

any traits outside the APG need a reference to what book they are from.

in fact, everything needs both a book reference and a page number.

other things include allowing the trapfinding class ability to allow the disabling of haunts with the disable device skill.


there is going to be 8 or 9 PCs, (including myself) 2 of which will be fairly inconsistent.

the PCs i can potentially confirm the existence of are

a Dwarven Axe and Board Fighter

a TWF Martial (or Mystic Thuerge)

a potential Psionicist

a likely wizard of some sort

a dominatrix cleric (L/N Kuthite who will probably have DM permission to channel positive instead of negative by virtue of neutrality)


hey look, it's Kelsey again.


the main thing i am looking for is backstory. build is roughly set up. just need a critique of the build and help with the backstory.


build to critique:

Akane Saitou
1st level Female Human (Tian) Rogue
Attributes; STR 13 DEX 16 Con 14 Int 14 Wis 14 CHA 12
Feats; Weapon Finesse, Toughness
Traits; Resilient, Indomitable Faith, River Rat, Reactionary (or chance savior)
Gear; Dagger, Hanbo, Slingshot, pouch with 40 pebbles, studded leather tailcoat (treat as studded leather armor) thieves tools, backpack, belt pouch, waterskin, flint/steel, 5 flasks of acid, 1 50 foot coil of silk rope, ioun torch, free outfit, 40 gold pieces unspent.
Skills; (12 total) Swim +5, stealth +6, sleight of hand +6, sense motive +6, perception +6 (+7 with traps), linguistics +6, disguise +5, disable device +7, diplomacy +5, climb +4, Bluff +5, Acrobatics +6

notable details.

5'5"

120 lbs

black hair

fair skin

amber eyes

slight build

potential servant to the clergy of Zon-Kuthon

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