I like the idea that this scenario will evolve over the seasons. I'm hoping there is a good mechanic so it doesn't feel like a flash back for 2 of the 3 parts.
I did like running some of the encounters especially those that made party go oh @#$¥.
My gripe is that getting maps that are out of print isn't fun. As much as I run scenarios I'm actually burnt out on drawing maps.the cost of ink to print them is straining my wallet too. I rather just buy the pregen printed maps.
If I was playing a home campaign this book might be more fitting,
For society play this verbal debate and other ideas for this book really bog down the game play. I like social aspect of games and role playing but as I said society play it slows the game way down to try and get people up to snuff on the mechanics
The writing of this scenario was a complete mess. I had to pretty much hold the players hands because they were just confused by the npc name. Also the editing was horrible as sections would completely just skip over what was actually going on.
Description and details in what you gave the players were just a jumbled mess. I assume some of this was because of word count description. It really need a bit more polish for something that had some really good potential.