I was looking for a way to share this contest, but I guess the off-topic forum would be the best place?
Anyway, A.R.M.R Studios along side Wayward Rogues Publishing are holding a contest, and giving away a free pdf of their brand new book, Cultures of Celmae - Dwarfs. A book that even contains a new hybrid class!
Follow this link for the contest rules.
It's just untyped bonus damage. I did add a line explaining that it counts as a magical attack for the purpose of overcoming DR/Magic. Thank you! :)
And if you re-read the bloodline arcana you'll see that they get proficiency with heavy armor.
And I totally forgot to add something else to Bolster Enhancements, it also works for any enhancement bonus cast on a item you wield... Let me fix that...
Leap Attack does not provoke.
And I like the idea of making a feat for it to be combined with an attack of opportunity...
But I'll see what I can do with the wording...
Thanks again for all the feedback :)
Basically that's what it is a more powerful charge, he still needs to move at least 10 feet to do it properly. And the main reason I didn't place a minimum required jump distance was because I didn't want to add a jump check before the attack.
And a d8 because it balances better with the stereotypical two weapon rogues dealing d6's after every attack.
Thanks for letting me know about the typo.The class' name was changed to Zephyrus.
Basically that's the difference between leaping charge and leap attack.
And when you mean height restriction, do you mean weather or not the zephyrus could attack a flying opponent flying over head?
[threadjack]@Rallaster: Also, I see on your blog you are working on a Berzerker monk/barbarian hybrid class that gets extra attacks in a berserk rage. If you're looking for more ideas, I'm happy to gift you a copy (either here or thru Drivethru) of the Savage Alternate Class for monks and barbarians dubbed " the monk/barbarian-class the ACG should have delivered, but didn't." by endzeitgeist in his 5 star review…[/threadjack]
Oh wow that sounds very interesting!
I sent you an e-mail with a sample of my work.
Hahaha, thanks a lot for the feedback...
So I made a witch archetype that gives the witch a spellbook that eventually gains various innate abilities, like devouring other spellbooks or witch familiars to gain spells.
Let me know what you guys think of The Occult Scholar, and if there's anything that I should change/modify to make it better.
Ah! I saw, thanks a bunch!
Writing and editing on a mobile device isn't as easy as I thought :3
I'm not ridiculing you. I'm recommending starting small and utilize the existing design spaces as much as possible. Actually, have you considered entering into the RPG Superstar competition? The forums there can really help you build up your design skills. They have mine.
I uploaded a design two days ago actually. And believe it or not I take notes on almost EVERYTHING people suggest on my classes and I fix accordingly and the people in these forums have helped me a LOT with my writing. And I am VERY thankful for that. Sadly my gaming group is just me and 2 other friends so we have small games and I rarely get to play test my stuff.
@Lich Bard: Thanks for the heads up, I fixed it. And I'll be sure to read on that.
@Cyrad: The fighter basically only has 4 class features... Feats, Bravery, Weapon Training and Armor Training...
@LazarX: It wouldn't kill you to read it before making assumptions from the name... Sephyrus, sounds like zephyr? Also, its based on the name of a greek god Zephyrus. God of wind.
Just because Paizo/someone else did it doesn't mean it bears repeating. Sure. But you didn't just ask. You asked for assistance. Folk provided advice.
And I'm open to suggestions, all names on the poll were given to me by friends or people from the forums.
Also, a trick a lot of writers use is to repeat the writing style of other authors so they can develop their own writing style and polish themselves. That's what I repeat what other successful publishers have done.
I have no problem whatsoever making a new poll, but I need actual example of names.
You mean real world names like the Knights of Charlemagne, also known as Paladins? What about Inquisitor and all the bad stuff the name brings with itself? Barbarians? Witches and Druids also have some negative historic connotations.
It's just the name for a class for a table top role playing game...