Malavik Forzeyr's page

Congrats! Have fun!

Indeed, good luck to all applicants, though some of you need less luck than others. There were a lot of good submissions.

Well, I updated things a bit and added a dialogue sample (cliché as it may be). I know there are many good submissions and so if I don't get accepted, I will understand and I wish everyone good luck! =)

I see a lot of people seem to be familiar with one another here. =)

Updated background with more flavor (mostly from before his 'change', including possible hooks/enemies). Not sure if I'm done yet or not with tweaking.

I forgot Beorn posted his proposed crunch in a spoiler here and looked at his Alias, lol. I was confused for a moment, heh.

Also, sadly, I changed my Campaign Trait after re-reading the Fed-Up Citizen trait again. It is mainly good for Lawful characters, and the Child of Kintargo feat really better applies to Malavik. But I'm not sure if having the same Campaign Trait as other PCs will be a problem for consideration or not.

(updated his equipment, sheet and description accordingly)

What?!? Of course everybody knows about Malavik Tanessen and that poor Wexilor girl. It's just that we don't discuss it over dinner with the Tanessen, now that would just be bad manners.

Oooh! What if they were invited to each other's weddings? Obviously his has been cancelled, and he's been uninvited from hers but still... =)

Hmm. I wonder if Doreen and Malavik know one another from before, seeing as they are both from wealthy merchant families. Or at least know of each other/each other's families.

I like Malavik's background but I almost feel like it needs...something.

Okay, I added to the background about the hero - she died during the Civil War defending the Church when it was burned to the ground (and threw a description and personality up there as well).

”Malavik Forzeyr” wrote:

I would like to submit Malavik, a Warpriest of Cayden Cailean. I just need to update him slightly for your creation rules.

Your character looks good, just needs the few updates you mentioned yourself. Is there any significance to Malavik’s current last name or is it just the alias he picked?

I believe he is updated now.

For the last name, heh, he picked the last name from a former priest of Cayden Cailean in the city that died many years ago. (Yes, I'm making that up totally but I thought it added a cool element to him). I apparently forgot to include that in the background so I will see about updating that soon.

Hell's Rebels? Hells yeah!

I would like to submit Malavik, a Warpriest of Cayden Cailean. I just need to update him slightly for your creation rules.

Hmm. I'll have to see if I can change the background and add to it to meet your hefty requirements for Malavik here. =)

There have been a lot of good submissions, so good luck to everyone and may the game be long-lived and fun!

Malavik Forzeyr wrote:

I am more than willing to have connections with other PCs as well, though it would likely make sense to see if we're accepted first before doing too much. =)

derpdidruid wrote:

I suppose that's correct, still more than willing to collaborate with a someone should we achieve player status.

Linking before a game is a double-edged sword. It either means both are in or both are out. Still, bring the characters with some fluff and we'll see if you make the cut.

Also, as a side note I forgot to mention in previous posts, @Isabelle d'Sarini, a bit more than a simple summary of your character and her motivations would help your chances.I like me some fluff.

Hmm...do I need more fluff? =)

And anyone who wants may read my background though it may spoil the surprise of my character for you (if he gets accepted at least), and PM me for background linking options.

I am more than willing to have connections with other PCs as well, though it would likely make sense to see if we're accepted first before doing too much. =)

Here is the submission for Ignuspyre's warpriest of Cayden Cailean.