| SirPeanut |
This song is about my bard's life. This is always the first song he sings when ever he sing in a tavern. (although he does not say it is about him)
I'm looking for opinions and how to fix it and make it better and more fun (this is my first attempt at making a song/poem so please be gentle)
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-------There once was a boy with a beautiful voice.-------
-------Bringing song and spirit where ever he wound.-------
-------When ever he entered the people rejoiced.-------
-------(need something here)-------
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-------But soon did news spread to his town.-------
-------Thou grim and sad the news where found.-------
-------This brave little boy did not frown.-------
-------For his father would surely role in the ground.-------
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-------The news spoke of raiders coming his way.-------
-------The people where scared and silence was found.-------
-------But this little boy walked up on the stage.-------
-------And sang till everyone was ready to (need a rhyme)-------
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-------such is the story of this brave little boy.-------
-------Who stood up to fear to save this town.-------
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