Lemmy |
(Apologies if this is not the appropriate forum, I don't really know where to post this).
Hey, I know that is not possible for normal poster, but could I ask an admin to edit a post for me?
Of course I only noticed a couple mistakes there when the post as 1h and 2 min old. -.-'
The mistakes really bother me because it's the opening post of my new PbP campaign, so it kinda feels like the game had a bad start. :(
The mistakes are the following:
In the 2nd paragaph...
"One step beyond this point and you're no longer my problem, so keep moving!" shouts a grumpy dockmaster as you walk down the wharf. "All those who wish to become permanent citizens are required to register at the notary.."
The bolded part should be removed. It belongs somewhere else in the post, but since I apparently forgot to erase it here, it's said twice.
-.-
The second one is not as bad, but it still bugs me to no end... At the 6th paragraph...
She scoffs at him and they both disappear into the crowd.
It should read...
She scoffs at him as they both disappear into the crowd.
Thanks in advance to any admin who decides to fix those for me. If that's not possible, well, then thanks for the attention.