Great ending, glad to see Nekhtep come clean with Jasilia. Nice work!
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Great action scenes at the beginning of the chapter especially. Interesting to see how magic was used in this situation too.
Nice job on writing a chapter that provided back story and moved the plot forward.
Read this as I am a fan of CPC's writing, not very familiar with the Pathfinder world, but this opening chapter makes it obvious this is some type of Ancient Egyptian setting within the Pathfinder world. Looked a few things up on the Pathfinder Wiki, but everything is basically on the page. Jasilia is a cool character, but I have to admit Nekhtep is my favorite. Although I do have a soft spot for swordsmen in heroic fiction. Great opening chapter. |