Latrecis wrote:
A handful of concerns...
Most importantly, for my part I think it's bad GMing if something bad happens to someone pc's care about that they are powerless to stop - if it happens by GM fiat. I may be jumping to conclusions but I assume your pc's are on good relations with Ameiko so I would suggest you give them some recourse to save her.
Framing Ameiko seems a stretch. If she and Tsuto are in cohoots, why did he send her the letter? Why is she near death when the pc's find her - she's stabilized at negative hit points, implying she was dying before stablilizing on her own. Is her supposed allegiance to Tsuto reflected in his journal? The journal that explicitly implicates Nualia? And how exactly did Ameiko get to Magnimar, discover something about the skinsaw cult and get back in time? It's two days there and two days back. How long was the group at Thistletop? And how quickly was she ready to travel after being rescued?
There are some hidden dangers to the path your taking. You will leave your pc's with the decided impression that the government officials of Varisia are either incompetent or completely corrupt. Hemlock and Deverin come off pretty weak in the AP (at least as written) and they look even worse now, letting Nualia get hauled off despite all the harm she's done to Sandpoint as well as letting Ameiko get framed. And the first official from Magnimar they meet is hopeless;y corrupt. Don't be surprised if they have a heavy disdain for authorities going forward and run amok in Magnimar, regardless of legality, etc. Perhaps in Sandpoint, too.
If you sentence Ameiko to the Hells, be prepared to run a rescue attempt. And there's a chance your pc's ignore the start of Book 2 in lieu of trying to save their friend. Any sort of "it's impregnable, never been escaped from" narrative is likely to have an opposite affect. That's the kind of challenge players interpret as something the are supposed to do.
Oh, and if you didn't want them to take prisoners you could have just told them. After this, you should assume they'll never take another prisoner again. Because it will become very obvious that if they hadn't spared Nualia, none of the rest would have happened.
All good points. That being said, is there anywhere that talks about suggestions for modifying Skinsaw Murders? I just really don't like how Justice Ironbriar comes COMPLETELY out of left field.