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Unlike the other cards sets, the download for this only has PDFs, but no JPGs – is that by design or a mistake?

I'm also missing the PDF despite being a subscriber …

FWIW, my shipment just arrived here in Austria.

So, any news on this?

I got a mail about this having been updated, but it doesn't appear to have been updated yet?

So, it seems this is now finally out. :)

I'm a bit late to the party, but I still want to join the chorus of “please tone down the release speed, it's too much right now”.

I'm sorry to hear that Andrew's art didn't strike a chord with you. The second story arc has a new artist on board and you can see some samples of his page art on his art page here:

http://jakebilbao.deviantart.com/gallery/

Yeah, that looks *far* more appealing to me. :)

So any possibility of seeing a pawn and comic book subscription before GenCon?

Yeah, I'm waiting for those, too …

You know what to do.

I voted for The Unsheathed Revolution, though I also liked the other three; The Scarlet God came close to getting my vote, but the need to shift the adventure away from Leng didn't help. Dustpawn also sounded nice, but the Galt adventure just groked better for me.

Our Favorite Judge wrote:

- You're using a lot of passive voice, though. Try and avoid as many conventions of the verb "to be" as you can. So, go back and highlight just the places where you used "is"..."are"..."was"...and "were" etc. If the majority of your write-up is relying on those types of verbs, you need to work on replacing them with more active verbs to make your prose read better and come across as more evocative.

- Go back through and identify all the usages of the verb "to be" by highlighting "is"..."are"..."was"...and "were"...and you'll see you rely way too much on that to convey your ideas. Overall, your writing would be stronger if you can find ways to use more active verbs as you present your villain's backstory and the location's history. Sometimes, it's okay to rely on a "was" or "were" when talking about things in the past. But use them sparingly.

Pet peeve: Passive voice is not the same as using forms of the verb ”to be“.

I prefer Deepnettle, but Splinterwall and Thornkeep also sound good. Death's Echo sounds too corny to me.

"This story originally appeared in serialized form in Pathfinder Adventure Path #31–36.

This story originally appeared as part of Paizo's free weekly webfiction series, and is available for free at http://paizo.com/pathfinder/tales/serial."

One or the other – namely, the first of the two; the second shouldn't be there.

As his name's a blatant rip-off of Koschei (KAWS-chei), I'd suppose Kostchtchie would be pronounced KAWS-ch-chei. KAWS-ch-chee and KAWS-ch-chai might work too, but I'd prefer the most literal pronunciation possible.