Havran Kuzgun's page

If it stopped before the last sentence, it would make perfect sense. So I'm ignoring what 'benefits based on the class' might be :)

And I think the character sheet is good now :)

@GM Scary Ceiling Voice

This is the part that keeps confusing me:

Apprentice Option
Source Gamemastery Guide pg. 195
If the story you want to tell is about characters who have started training to become a particular class, you can grant them a small number of additional abilities. An apprentice character is trained in the skill or skills specified for their chosen class[/b] (such as Occultism and Performance for a bard) in addition to the skills they gain through their initial proficiencies. They also gain benefits based on the class.

The bold text is my addition.

Regardless, I am reviewing the character once more (and Manuk was the name of another of my characters - more haste and less speed when cutting and pasting a template!)

EDIT - Updated and complete (I hope). The only feat I have taken is the Background Feat, as the other state 1st Level and I'm happy to wait until she levels up to take them :)

I've reviewed, checked, double-checked and re-checked the crunch, so it should be all ready for inspection (but accept that the same pair of eyes reviewing something tends to come up with the same answer time after time!) :)

Which means I'm re-reviewing it now - and it will be ready today. I keep forgetting what's granted at Level 0 versus Level 1!

FluffSeeker here again, introducing Havran Kuzgun. I've worked on the crunch, but at the moment its focused on the fluff and some of the early decisions on ancestry and background :)

And yes, I decided on the Apprentice option.