Stumped: A Game show where grey matter, don't matter


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I am an animator for the series and we would like your input on the series.
You can even give a few suggestions on anything

Episodes:
Stumped Episode 1
Stumped Episode 2
Stumped Episode 3

The forth episode is being worked on.

Stumped Playlist get's updated with the new releases.

We will also be starting some 3D animations a bit later.


Anyone?

Oh right GenCon and Weekend bad mix for posts.


Let's try this again.


Anyone?


Trying a new category for feedback


We need feedback on the series,
if we get enough feedback and support we can start working on a few more series.


Interesting. Some of the humor reminds me of "Celebrity Jeopardy" from Saturday Night Light.

I don't think the huge real-picture bobbleheads on cartoon bodies works. Jib-Jab makes it work by blending it in to animation so it seems quasi-real.

What animation there is seems stiff. The effect comes off as just throwing up a still picture of a celebrities face when the impersonator speaks.

What I would do is get rid of the photograph faces. The whole thing should be done with a traditional animation look (Futurama, Venture Brothers, etc) There needs to be better flow and more action.

The impersonations need a little more work. Colbert doesn't sound right at all. Dana Carvey once said that the secret is not in imitating the voice but the personality. You do a decent job with Connery, Bush, and Schwarzenegger but you need to get into their character more.

The jokes have some nice ideas but the timing is a little off. Celebrity Jeopardy worked by being snappy and played against Trebek as the straight man. I don't think Colbert is really the right choice for this.


darth_borehd wrote:

Interesting. Some of the humor reminds me of "Celebrity Jeopardy" from Saturday Night Light.

I don't think the huge real-picture bobbleheads on cartoon bodies works. Jib-Jab makes it work by blending it in to animation so it seems quasi-real.

What animation there is seems stiff. The effect comes off as just throwing up a still picture of a celebrities face when the impersonator speaks.

What I would do is get rid of the photograph faces. The whole thing should be done with a traditional animation look (Futurama, Venture Brothers, etc) There needs to be better flow and more action.

The impersonations need a little more work. Colbert doesn't sound right at all. Dana Carvey once said that the secret is not in imitating the voice but the personality. You do a decent job with Connery, Bush, and Schwarzenegger but you need to get into their character more.

The jokes have some nice ideas but the timing is a little off. Celebrity Jeopardy worked by being snappy and played against Trebek as the straight man. I don't think Colbert is really the right choice for this.

Thank you for your feedback,

I'm still learning the animation software
Jots notes
  • make actors less stiff,
  • Put more persona in actors
  • Work on timing


  • dotting
    youtube is blocked at the office - will take a gander when I get home in the evening


    We hope you "Like" the series,
    and post some comments


    The bodies of the characters used in those videos are not cartoon, but real-life images, hence the real-life heads.

    Note to self, bring heads more into proportion for next series.


    Definitely got a Celebrity Jeopardy vibe - especially since Sean Connery was a staple for that sketch back in the day. Not necessarily a bad thing, but might be something to bear in mind. That being said, the voices were all pretty good.

    Colbert's lines had me laughing the most often (especially the crack about steroids being the leading cause of scottish women growing beards - that line in particular was gold), but each of the celebrities got me chuckling at least once too.

    The other suggestions and the 3 notes you jotted down up above are good ideas to keep in mind. Wish you guys the best of luck and hope you have a lot of success with these!


    We were aiming for a SNL - Celebrity Jeopardy feel, good to know we got that done well.
    I know after we get the 4th episode up, we'll be toying with other styles; cartoon and 3D.

    I do know that the next comedic series (after the 4th ep) will have some new faces, and a 007 of a host.
    Provided we have enough of a viewer ship to warrant it.

    Now I ask;
    "Who do you look up to?"
    "Hopefully you all get the reference."


    We are still looking for more feedback.
    And we want as much of it as possible.


    A medieval fantasy series is in idea pool (though at the bottom),
    if we get some support for it, I'll see If I can raise it closer to the top.
    It'll be either cartoon style or 3D.


    We are nearly finished episode four.


    Episode four just needs some post-production work and it'll be up.


    Episode four is looking more animated than the previous episodes.


    Does that mean it's up? I'll check it out this weekend.


    Post-production work is still needed,
    after a quick review of the whole production,
    I found a few odd animation errors and Obama was lacking some animation.

    I forgot to put a few things back to their original position after animating certain parts and looked bad after the camera zoomed back.


    To make up for the delay
    I offer a few screen grabs in a funny order

    Grab1

    Grab2

    Grab3

    I think one of them would make a funny desktop background.


    Ahh - the classic facepalm! lol


    If you like the series please show it around.


    If I get some time,
    I'll take a screen shot of an in the works demo I'm working on

    demo:
    The one in the works is a horror atmosphere test, Hoping to add a spooky resident or two in the demo.
    It's being done in 3D


    Very Early Alpha Demo

    Notify me if the link's not working


    Looking for ideas


    Friday is the last day we'll accept ideas for our demo videos


    Forth episode is in Post-Production.
    Hopefully they don't ask for some edits


    The Forth episode should be up tomorrow,

    and the first demo is almost done.

    First Demo Screen Grab


    There is a third Character in the demo scene and it's in a Campaign setting book.


    Stumped Episode 4 is up


    The first demo is done working on the second one.
    The first three demos will go up at the same time.


    Stumped EP 4 screengrabs, since links got broken.
    Grab1

    Grab2

    Grab3

    I think one of them would make a funny desktop background.


    Here's a quick peek at one of the early demos

    Waiting_Girl

    Rainy_day

    Left_subway

    Come_on_in

    Big_Building


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