Richard Moore wrote:
Interesting concept, but WAY under-priced for what it can do. Good grammar and formatting, nice mix of flavor and crunch.
I agree with James Olchak about the charge system - it feels clunky on this item. I think a per diem usage limit would work just as well and be less confusing, especially because Krunker io a lot of similar items are structured so that absorbing an effect grants them a charge.
Editing nitpick: If you reference a spell such as wall of fire in your description, that spell name needs to be italicized.
Cool ideas though, just think you put a bit too much into one single item, even at a higher price.
