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The old Cassomir Dollhouse and Red Snow Ravine.

Definately my prefered and my only votes being cast.

Man, now I totally want to create a villain based on my (non-gaming) sister. Why have I never thought of doing that?

Beats me, my character was a stubborn jack ass that pretty much kept f@@~ing up all his plans(from what i remember anyways)....ype thats me lol

Venerax wrote:
I'll be completely honest....as your brother of course lol...I didnt feel, based on your villian, that you should move on anyways. You've been thinking up villians and battle ideas since we were like 7(average age of us both lol) and i truthuflly thought this articular one was underwhelming and uninteresting...

Comming from a guy who has actually admired most of your work and has portrayed himself based on a villian you created that just so happened to based on me. (Venerax Angel) Love that name lol

Anyways good job anyways, I've been meaning to game with you once or twice more before you move away but alas...i am to busy....

Also I'm truthfully suprised you took the time to respond to most of the critism lol

Your lack of faith disturbs me, brother.

Well you didn't expect me to be impressed in anyway did u? Heck i could have come up with better concepts than you did through this whole process....i just dont know the nitty gritty details to do something like this.

Venerax wrote:

Kinda reminds me of the true blood alchemist? from Fullmetal Alchemist.. i may be mistaken on the name because i haven't seen it in a while but yes...creating living dolls of his daughter...who by his own fault was dead. Creepy....

Oh yeah, the Sewing Life Alchemist! He WAS creepy!

YEAH!!! that was it.....friggan creepy S.O.B.....

I'll be completely honest....as your brother of course lol...I didnt feel, based on your villian, that you should move on anyways. You've been thinking up villians and battle ideas since we were like 7(average age of us both lol) and i truthuflly thought this articular one was underwhelming and uninteresting...

Comming from a guy who has actually admired most of your work and has portrayed himself based on a villian you created that just so happened to based on me. (Venerax Angel) Love that name lol

Anyways good job anyways, I've been meaning to game with you once or twice more before you move away but alas...i am to busy....

Also I'm truthfully suprised you took the time to respond to most of the critism lol

I actually had mine mostly ready to go, and was working on cutting down the word count. I'll post her on here at the conclusion of this round. :)

I'm listening lol

darn right its time. Thats why i was looking in this thread in the first place

I'm voting for this one mostly because i can relate back to a character I had years ago. I used similar tactics and really enjoyed the whole meld into stone idea and what not. Got my vote keep up the good work.

Abbey Kirkminster, a female LE inquisitor dedicated to a LN deity, preferably one with a LG clergy that helps the PCs. She would essentially be a thorn in their sides, setting them up to perform dangerous tasks, then swooping in and stealing the glory and gold from the PCs. She would have a powerful benefactor in the church, probably her dad, who wouldn't hesitate to smite the PCs if they mess with his daughter. And because the deity is LN, it would be doing a lot of the law and order stuff in the realm, so, technically, all the actions the villainess does against the PCs is legal. And the LG clergy would be the ones giving the PCs healing stuff, so if they mess with the church too much, they lose valuable allies too.

I'm picturing a female version of Malfoy Draco, someone the PCs will love to hate, can get in a minor scrape or two with, but can't vanquish without serious consequences.

ooo I like this one. Something i can really sink my teeth into and tally what kind of consequences are going to come of it. Depending on my characters alignment would vary my decision and thus i prefer these types of scenerios. Give me a good chance to really critical think which is something i prefer about a game. I would have easily voted on this one due to the fact that I vote based on concept not the numbers and the nitty gritty stuff. I personally have found most of the entrees in this round rather lack luster. Concept wise that is. Some good ones that peak my interest though.

Now i am not one to be able to do a stat block. Well heck i've never done a stat block. But I have always liked the thought of a villian like this, I always find them most dangerous:

I think i would have tried to do something with character sketch 6. I think I would have made him a known criminal in the lands. But the twist is there are... strange going ons in his town. (not sure what) But the party gets wind of it and he acts as an informant to them for a large portion of the quest. Passing them false information he then uses them to kill or ruin enemy's of his.

With ranks in diplomacy and bluff he becomes the perfect master mind playing both sides and even takes part in an ambush where he is minorly injured in the fight were he fights along side of you, thus gaining the pc's trust further.

There are of course holes in that but I think that would be more interesting than most other villains i have read so far.

Kinda reminds me of the true blood alchemist? from Fullmetal Alchemist.. i may be mistaken on the name because i haven't seen it in a while but yes...creating living dolls of his daughter...who by his own fault was dead. Creepy....

So after taking a brief over view of the other entrees and their comments I would put you in the top 10 at least which in my books leaves you with a pretty good chance at moving up. Of course I could be wrong but you got my vote. Good Luck