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The cook comes out of the galley carrying a slop bucket. He dips a greasy ladle into the thick contents of the bucket and drops a glob of some sort of stew into Vorel's bowl.

A cabin boy follows with a second bucket, full of grog, which the cook serves into Vorel's cup with the same greasy ladle.

"Anything else m'lord?" the cook asks with a sarcastic sneer, turning and walking out of the room before Vorel can answer.

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Several typos and spelling mistakes (like "feat's" for the plural of "feat").

The Grammar Nazi doesn't come around here much anymore, so they sent me instead.

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Are we the Baddies?

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Grammar Nazi wrote:
Message board troll wrote:
Has anyone been called a nazi yet?

Your sentence uses the passive voice, and—

Oh. Hm.

Is this where we're meeting? I just got the memo.