Male Elf Magus (Spelldancer) 1
Yucale wrote: The aasimar excuses herself, having suddenly remembered something, and makes her way over to Lyle. To Taniriel, who is standing close by (either that or she doesn't want to talk to the drunken humans who are closer), "Do you've any idea when he'll wake up?" Taniriel looks up at the woman with the blue skin. When who'll wake up?[b] He says looking over the crowd. [b]I don't see anyone asleep. Then he turns back to the woman, I'm Taniriel by the way. He puts one hand to his chest and makes a small bowing gesture.
Male Elf Magus (Spelldancer) 1
An elf sits in the room, his dark green hair swaying as he moves. Taniriel listens to the stories, a small smile on his face. When the opening comes, he tells the story of when he met Sir Cosma, laughing at the contrast between the lengthy discussion about the ruins and the violent swordplay with goblins. When he finishes, he raises his glass high, To Sir Cosma, the scholar and the warrior. The rest of his drink slides quickly down Taniriel's throat.
Taniriel's been fixed. I didn't do much with some of the background because a lot of that was intended the way you said above, just wasn't clear enough. (Such as warped casting. That's why he couldn't unlock it until he studied the sword. It changed the way he moved and spoke enough to make it work.)
Alright so finally got the background done. Took a little longer than I had hoped. I know that I may need to change some things (being that I am elven where you said the most changes would be), but I figured it would be easier for me to start and then have you tell me where the changes are needed. Just let me know and I will happily fix it. BTW: I just realized I never mentioned, this is Runner188. |