
JakNephilim |
Okay, I've been wanting to try making a few things beyond simple magic items, and so I've tried my hand at a sorcerer bloodline. Please take a look and give me some input.
Uchiha Bloodline
A member of the Uchiha clan of shinobi, you are particularly skilled at fire spells, and perhaps one day will awaken the Sharingan.
Class Skill:Perception
Bonus Spells:
Heightened Awareness (3rd) Dispel Magic (Counterspell only)(5th) Suggestion(7th) Phantasmal Killer(9th) Spellsteal (11th) Flame Strike (13th) Project Image(15th) Frightful Aspect(17th) Dominate Monster(19th)Bonus Feats:
Bloodline Arcana : The Uchiha are particularly skilled at the use of Fire spells. Anytime you cast a spell with the Fire descriptor, you deal +1 damage per die rolled.
1st Eye of Insight: You gain Martial Flexibility as a Brawler of your level. You must have seen someone use the ability you wish to gain. Your level only contributes to the number of uses per day you gain, in all other ways you are treated as a 1st level Brawler. This stacks with other Martial Flexibility features.
3rd Copy Wheel Eye: You have learned how to copy spells used by others. When you witness someone cast a spell, you may make a spellcraft check to identify the spell. Success means you are able to learn the spell, storing it in an open spell slot. If you have the option of replacing one of your spells known, you may instead replace the old spell with the copied spell.
9th Mangekyou Sharingan: Your sharingan evolves, granting you greater ability to predict your opponent’s moves. You gain a +1 insight bonus to attack rolls, AC, and Reflex saving throws, +1 per four levels to a maximum of +3 at 17th level. You can use this ability for 1 round per level a day.
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20th
To go along with it, Phantasmal Killer is Tsukiyomi, Flame Strike is Amateratsu, and Frightful Aspect is Susanoo.
I'm a little worried that the 3rd and 9th level abilities are a little underwhelming. Normally, Martial Flexibility takes up most of your...
I think that you should make the ninth level bonus more powerful, but give it a downside.