Greetings everyone. I have been lurking in this topic for a while, and I figured it would be about time to give an update on what I'm up to.
I am the author of the 7-part review of the two books of Throne of Night and the one currently attempting to write up a detailed "fixed" version of the adventure. As of the time of writing this, I have posted on Reddit fixes on Book 1, mainly adding a mockup army combat system to better represent the PCs fighting to take over two cities. On the Google Drive document, besides all of the material I wrote up so far, I also have a draft ready for most of Book 2.
This is a commenter's link to that document in case anyone wants to either look at it early or leave suggestions on how to improve it. Holiday season is pretty busy for me, so I'm filling it out mostly in what spare time I can find. As I said at the end of the book 1 posts, I will publish parts 6 and onwards either during or after the Xmas period.
Thank you all for your attention.