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Stained Peaks
Iskandria
Yithanai
Bereket
Vramaire

Almost voted for Caramach...the passion in the writing and the bigger-than-life ideas really appealed to me; but, I found the others more complete rhetorically, thematically, and compositionally.

Good luck to all in the next round.

My biggest fear upon hearing about this contest was that no one of any real talent would make it to the next round.

My fears have been allayed.

Hey don't feel too bad, Jag Dell, I submitted an entry that omitted a line that causes a quirky utility item to become more of a PC money mill. They'll take one look at it a go...'Oh dear, no.'

lol

Guess I'll catch the next one.

Doh! I submitted but realized I left a very important line out that would nullify a potential money/magic item mill! Arg!!! Oh, well. It will be fun to look at all the submissions that make it.