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The work that you guys put into all this really impresses me. I was not aware of this contest at all until a few months ago and the amount of information pouring out has been really overwhelming. So my hat goes off to all of you upstairs.

I read through all the entries and wish I had final say, assuring myself that I would be fair, impartial, critical but encouraging, and know I would make the right choice. And then I ponder how much work all that would actually be, and how torn I already am between submissions when I DON'T have it all resting on me. You have all my respect, but absolutely none of my envy.

Oooooh! I like it!

Cutting my entry down to 600 words may have been the most painful experience of my life, and I'm terrified that I lost something crucial. Someone mentioned on another thread that they were so surprised to have advanced to another round that they had not done any work ahead of time, and that seems to be dogging me all the way through this. Fingers crossed!

I've only been to 1 games day so far. Thanks Aram, I'm doing my best but who has the time? :P

I have not yet played in any of the online games, (honestly, I haven't figured out how yet :P) but I'd love to try it.

I'd be ALL OVER a "play your archetype" game if anyone lived anywhere near me, but I don't think that's likely :(

I looked at items for creative uses first and foremost, and that made this one of my favorites. It was definitely the one that I figured would knock me out of the running if a finite number of gloves had been allowed :P

I am really jonesing to see these submissions come up. I am definitely one of the people guilty of waiting until the last minute to submit mine, and I know that's probably going to cost me.
I was very impressed with all the other items that were selected, so I'm a little intimidated.
If that three day turnaround had happened any time other than last week I could have put so much more work into it. Sadly the life of an actor/youth care worker/sports enthusiast/wannabe RPG designer doesn't let you decide when spare time will poke its head out of the sand.

I had a wizard idea I didn't use, but thematically I'm still happier with the one I went with. Even though it's falling into one of the more populous class archetypes. This is close to the breakdown I expected though so I went in hoping I'd just have a good enough original idea, even if it doesn't give love to the more overlooked classes.

I'm new to this contest, but I'd be surprised if they gave us another geographically based restriction. Unless this is something they've done in previous years (kept the whole contest to a specific theme) I would imagine something else out of left field.

Either way I hope I get that far! I've never worked with archetypes before so this round of the contest was unfamiliar ground for me.

Thanks very much for the feedback everyone! It is a tremendous honor to have advanced to the next round!

I completely agree with the criticism from a lot of people that this item has the potential to be abused by a smart player. While I see the inherent risks in that, it wasn't by accident. I'm a huge fan of my players thinking outside the box, and there's very little that I am likely to reward them more for. Most of the fellas in my gaming group are fairly new players, and I'm proudest poppa in the world when they outsmart me or think of something I didn't rather than use their swords to solve every problem. I like giving them utilitarian items just to see what they'll come up with. I must admit that I hadn't considered the potential for defense against sonic attacks, and I'm not sure how I'd rule on that either.

And yes: completely guilty of the "highly sought." I did read all of the suggestions and guidelines, but it just seemed to fit. I had no idea I'd be seeing it so often :P

Once again, thank you all! I'm working hard on the spit and polish for next round!

I think Arkos' point is exactly right. While I personally look more for good comprehension of game mechanics than it seems most people do, I think my votes are only likely to equal out with the people that look more for flash.
And I am now a close to 1000 voter and have seen my own item only twice.

Though regarding the point on spelling: I'm not quite anal enough to have downvoted someone because of a spelling error :P
Unless that error occurred in the title. Then I cried a little and just couldn't help myself.

Excellent move here to keep everyone invested.
Though I must say I hadn't realized I'd voted that much. I hope no one at work notices :P

I agree with this thread and am very happy to have seen it created. I admit that I have voiced some negativity regarding some of the entries I've seen, but there are posts on another thread in particular that border on cruel. I am posting this comment here because I don't want to give that thread any more focus, I'd much rather just see it die.

People are commenting that certain phrases that have appeared repeatedly are driving them crazy. I feel the same way, but none of that is actually a reflection on the item, only that you've seen it in many different items. That doesn't make any of them bad items! Did you know the phrase "appears to be" occurs three times on the very first page of wondrous items in the core rulebook? Well by god ma barker! We'd better ban all those items before someone gets annoyed! Those redundant phrases are only a problem because people are scanning a few hundred items a day, but none of the people that submitted those items were looking over each others shoulders to know what anyone else was submitting. Those phrases are only a problem if they're clumsy or inaccurate descriptors. You'll have to forgive people for using phrasing that was good enough for the CRB as long as it's effective.

That's my rant, I apologize if it seems overboard, but there are a lot of posts on that thread that are far too specific, and I am very concerned with the influence they may have over people's voting.

I agree with a few of the people above, that while I make formatting my last consideration, I DO make it a consideration.

I would never choose a lame but perfectly formatted item over a great item that used random capitals and omitted the prices, but I'm annoyed by how much work I put into previewing and re-previewing my own item to make sure it was exactly what was asked for, but a lot of people don't seem to have bothered. I agree that this is more minor than item quality considerations, but we were handed the formatting guidelines on a silver platter. People who strayed from them in big ways weren't invested enough in their item or this competition to do some very basic proofreading. I AM that invested and so were many others, and I plan on rewarding that dedication.

I see that they've removed the button to report, which is probably a good thing if people have been using it for fairly trivial stuff.
Unfortunately I've now come across an item that is horrifyingly blatant Harry Potter rip-off :(

There is a time limit between your votes, I assume to keep people from just clicking through without reading. That may be what's affecting your voting Bob.

Okay fair enough, thank you both. I only ask because I'm caught in a conundrum with two items beside each other that both have huge violations of the suggestions above and prefer not to cop out with the "vote for neither" button if this comes up a lot. I will take these points as suggestions rather than rules however, and still try to make selections as best I can.

I have a question about these rules in general as they relate to the current contest:
Would it be appropriate to "report an item for breaking the contest rules" if they violate this advice in a big way? I don't mean for a minor spelling or formatting error, but an item for example that breaks #23 in a big way by giving a potential benefit disguised as a drawback, or that seems ridiculously underpriced?
I'm not going to vote for such an item obviously, just wondering if it's the sort of thing you should report as well.

This is probably my favorite module so far. It works perfectly in my game as an ongoing open-ended mission while the players explore the vale, where I've set a few other encounters that belong with my existing campaign.