|Jensen Toperzer Star Voter Season 8 aka TealDeer|
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I only made it into Round 2 as an Alternate, as you all know. That means nobody got to see my map.
However, I really want feedback on it! This was my first time drawing a for real game map that wasn't just something I scribbled together right before a game based on an existing map, so I really want to improve and get better... so that next year I can kick butt and take names :)
What I want from you: Please critique my map as though it were an actual entry (if you have the time!)
I'm not going to put in commentary yet: I'm going to treat this like a for real entry, so, for the next... let's say a week, I will not publicly clarify anything or respond to any critiques with more than a vague "Thank you for your comment."
The "maybe more?" Is that I'm also considering putting in this thread a revised version of my magic item, along with my build process for that item and backstory... but that won't be till we're done with the map.
WITHOUT FURTHER ADO, JENSEN'S MAP ENTRY:
Thank you in advance for your feedback and comments!