| Sue Flaherty RPG Superstar 2011 Top 32 aka Gamer Girrl |
This phrase was used in another post, and it is soooooo right! I started with 257 words and began trimming, choosing new words, consolidating, and rewording ... and I'm down to 218! This is almost HARDER than doing the math and agonizing over the name ...
Ah, well, whine done, back to using the machete.
| Maurice de Mare RPG Superstar 2013 Top 16 , Marathon Voter Season 6, Marathon Voter Season 7, Marathon Voter Season 8, Dedicated Voter Season 9 aka Darkjoy |
This phrase was used in another post, and it is soooooo right! I started with 257 words and began trimming, choosing new words, consolidating, and rewording ... and I'm down to 218! This is almost HARDER than doing the math and agonizing over the name ...
Ah, well, whine done, back to using the machete.
Why don't you just rewrite the entire piece? Shaving off words will only get you so far, maybe starting anew will give you a cleaner and tighter worded item?
| Sue Flaherty RPG Superstar 2011 Top 32 aka Gamer Girrl |
Gamer Girrl wrote:Ah, well, whine done, back to using the machete.Why don't you just rewrite the entire piece? Shaving off words will only get you so far, maybe starting anew will give you a cleaner and tighter worded item?
I considered that, but there was able to do it with slight rewording and looking for unnecessary embelishments ::chuckle:: But man, those last three words to find were an interesting challenge :)