Editing mistakes

[Jal Dorak]

Here's some I haven't seen posted yet:

Missing page number on page 35 (under Krusk's foot).

Table 5-4: New Skills, should be Table 5-4: Skills.

Missing Table number for "Wind Effects on Fly" page 62 (would require renumbering all later tables).

Missing Table number for "Spellcraft DCs" page 72.

Missing Table title and number for "Leadership" page 90. Also missing bookmark for table.

Table misnumbered in current layout - Table 7-8: Donning Armor page 110, should be Table 7-7. Table 7-7 is on page 111, and should be renumbered to Table 7-8.

Table title - Table 8-9: Mounts and Vehicles should probably be titled "Movement for Mounts and Vehicles" for clarity.

Table title - Table 8-15: DCs to Break or Burst Items should probably be titled "Strength DCs to Break or Burst Objects".

Missing Table title and number for "Contact Other Plane Results" page 212.

Missing Table title and number for "Alignment Aura Strengths" page 215. Might be good to include a reference to this table in the relevant class sections (cleric and paladin).

Missing Table title and number for "Magic Aura Strengths" page 216.

Missing Table title and number for "Prismatic Effects" page 257.

Missing Table title and number for "Ioun Stones" page 379.

Missing Table title and number for "Necklace of Fireballs" page 381.

[silverhair2008]

Here are some additional editing mistakes I have found in the Beta Playtest.

SKILLS:
- p 69 - SMELL: "... the scent is present for more than a 10 minutes." Remove the "a".

- PERFORM: ACT has comedy listed under it, but COMEDY has its own listing. Perhaps replace comedy with Tragedy under ACT?

- SURVIVAL: TRY AGAIN: Refers to a chart on page 69, but the chart is on page 73.

FEATS:
- p 83 CRAFT STAFF: "A newly created staff has 10 charges."
p 360 STAVES: " A staff has 50 charges when created."

- CRAFT WAND: CASTER LEVEL 5th: A wizard doesn't become able to cast 4th level spells until 8th level. Should prerequisite be raised to 8th level?

- DEADLY AIM: Doesn't get a "minimum 1" like Combat Expertise?

- ACROBATIC, ALERTNESS, ATHLETIC, ANIMAL AFFINITY, DECEITFUL, DEFT HANDS, MAGICAL APTITUDE, PERSUASIVE, SELF-SUFFICIENT, SKILL FOCUS, STEALTHY: "...increase to +6..." should be "... increases to +6..."

- DODGE: Explanation of conditions for new players would be helpful.

- IMPROVED UNARMED STRIKE: "... you do not provoke attacks or opportunity..." Replace "or" with "of".

- LEADERSHIP: With FEATS now taken at odd numbered levels should the Character Level now be 7th to take this Feat?

EQUIPMENT:
- p 100 Last Paragraph under INAPPROPRIATELY SIZED WEAPONS is unclear to me. Perhaps an example would help?

- p 104 CURVE BLADE, ELVEN: It is referred to as ELVEN GREAT KUKRI in body. Which description and name is correct?

- p 100 Illustration of weapons shows a Flail as a Morning Star.

That's all I have found so far. Have a good life.

[Tarren Dei]

Some of these are finicky but here goes:

p. 20 "The cleric’s class skills are Appraise (Int), Craft (Int), Diplomacy". The tracking is tight here.

p. 20 change "Her alignment, however, may restrict her from casting certain spells opposed to her moral or ethical beliefs" to "Her alignment, however, restricts her from casting ...". No 'may' about it, is there?

p. 22 "This decision also determines whether the cleric can cast spontaneous cure or inflict spells (see spontaneous casting)." Add a note reminding that "Clerics of any alignment may memorize and cast Cure Light Wounds and Inflict Light Wounds spells."

p. 24 and p. 26 talk about alternative animal companions. This seems repetitive.

[Tarren Dei]

p. 31 "Lay On Hands (Su): Beginning at 2nd level, a paladin can heal wounds (her own or those of others) by touch. Each day she can use this ability a number of times equal to 1/2 her paladin level plus her Charisma bonus." change to "Each day she can use this ability a number of times equal to her Charisma bonus and 1/2 her paladin level." This makes sure they aren't thinking the Charisma bonus is also halved.

[Jal Dorak]

Not sure if this warrants mention, but the detect magic spell makes no mention of the ability to use Appraise to identify a magic item (and by extension, neither does identify say this explicitly). The only source of this information is the Appraise skill. I'm sensing this should not be the case.

[hogarth]

The minor wondrous item table (Table 15-16) still lists the 3.5 prices for the various Bags of Tricks.