RPG Superstar 2015 Top 16, RPG Superstar 2013 Top 32, RPG Superstar 2012 Top 16. RPG Superstar 6 Season Dedicated Voter, 7 Season Star Voter, 8 Season Star Voter, 9 Season Star Voter. 707 posts (747 including aliases). No reviews. No lists. No wishlists. 2 aliases.
Chris Shaeffer
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Chris Shaeffer
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Hey guys, I haven't been available much, but I've been checking in periodically!
I just want to say you've got this! Keep going! Two hours and you can rest! GO GO GO!
Chris Shaeffer
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Hey everybody! It looks like we have a deserving top 16! Congratulations!
About things on my end:
I had an ill-timed business trip, so I didn't get to spend as much time as I would have liked on the entire map making process. I was already too invested in the map by the time I realized I was getting too visually detailed with not enough meat. It would have riled people's sensitivities to have a weird mix of artistic and crude, so I just kept going on the path I found myself on to make things look as good as possible.
I'm pretty relieved though. I'm still on my trip, and I would probably would not have had the time or resources to make a proper monster.
So thus ends the saga of Chris as an RPGSS contestant! I'll stick around and participate in discussion, but I'm going to try taking my time and designing well thought out content on my own from now on.
I have limited internet while I'm here, so I'll check back in on the 24th when I get back. I expect some good monsters! Good luck and fight on! :)
Chris Shaeffer
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Hey folks, my name is Chris. Sorry for not being around much! I have been gearing up for a horribly timed three-week work trip to Japan, so it's tough to juggle everything. (Still excited! I leave Monday! Ack!)
I've been following and participating in the contest for a while. I guess my main motivation in previous years has been for fun and because, "heck, why not give it a go?"... I always seem to forget how hair-pullingly, non-sleepingly tough it can get.
I am the sort of person who starts off strong and kind of trails off into mediocrity as life and fatigue creep in. So that is my main challenge. In any case, I am hungering to give it my all and try to win it. I have decided this season will be my last attempt before just going ahead and doing professional game design on my own, so that should be a good motivator!
Uh, not to get too serious though. I still do it mostly for fun. :)
Chris Shaeffer
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Chris Shaeffer
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I hate maps.
I hate maps, and anyone who has ever made or looked a map.
Chris Shaeffer
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Lucky Pips wrote:
why on earth where you working on that before your map was due in?
Chris Shaeffer
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I really liked this one. I guess it really just breaks down to:
- +2 sling
- +2 buckler
- Light cantrip
But you pulled it together with a cool image, and it became something more! That simplicity plus flavor is what makes a good item in my mind.
Chris Shaeffer
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Jacob W. Michaels wrote:
Congrats, Chris. Are you the first quad contestant?
... Now that you mention it, I think I am. I think most three-timers get good enough to reach the top 8 and disqualify themselves.
Jacob W. Michaels wrote:
Also, I'm going to take your tactic next year of bemoaning my item's many faults and how embarrassed I am about it -- it's worked for you two years in a row now! ;)
Chris Shaeffer
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I knew this would make it. I think I saw it about three times and always upvoted it!
You had me at the dagger bit. Totally makes sense, and shows how items do best when the mechanics are a natural result of the premise.
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I never saw this when voting, but I love the idea! I imagine the letters skittering their way across the table with their little arms and serifs as if they were horribly deformed bugs.
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Thanks for the feedback everybody (especially Arianwen, great points!).
Here's a rewrite. Wow! Holy saved wordcount!
Caber Twig Rewrite (279 words):
Caber Twig Aura faint transmutation; CL 5th
Slot none; Price 300 gp; Weight 2 lbs.
Description
Carved from fine dark mahogany and polished to a smooth sheen, this 4-inch stick feels surprisingly heavy for its size when hefted in the palm. Notches divide the twig into four equal segments. Snapping the twig at any notch is a swift action that creates smaller twigs of appropriate sizes.
When tossed into the air with a flick of the wrist, a length of twig suddenly releases a deafening crack as it transforms into a massive log at the apex of its flight. It then lands tip-first on a creature, object, or 5-foot space within 30 feet. A creature must succeed at a DC 16 Reflex save and be forced into an adjacent space or else suffer 2d6 bludgeoning damage per twig segment used in the creation of the log.
Upon striking the space of its primary target, the log tilts and crashes down in a direction of the thrower’s choosing. All creatures within a line the length of the log from the space of impact must succeed at a DC 13 Reflex save or else suffer 1d6 bludgeoning damage per twig segment used. Medium or smaller creatures receiving this secondary damage fall prone and suffer the pinned condition, and must succeed at a Strength or Escape Artist check to escape. The DC of this check equals 10 plus 2 per twig segment used.
Created logs are always 2 feet in diameter, but measure 5 feet and 300 lbs. for every segment of twig used. The logs are not magical and remain indefinitely.
Construction
Requirements Craft Wondrous Item, plant growth; Cost 150 gp
And some notes on the item's creation:
Spoiler:
I think I was casually perusing wikipedia or youtube and started a little learning session about caber tossing. My brain made the connection for me and said, "Hey! Item!" It can be thrown at people and be used for cool interactions with the environment. Like, bridges, battering rams, support beams, and carving canoes or something out of them. Okay!
So I went with it. My first idea was a 15-foot caber that counted as a throwable greatclub with reach, but otherwise had the same overall powers as the final Caber Twig. I realized that A) Creating a new throwing weapon with reach would turn some people off, and B) People would moan about having to drag the damned thing into a dungeon. (See? I learned after the Scallywag! :p)
So I thought, well, what about a pocket-sized version? Solves both problems. That's where the caber twig came from. The name was easy at that point and never changed. I liked how it riffs off Caber Toss a little bit.
Other considerations:
- Initially had some complicated ideas about ironwood or cold iron being worked in somehow. Ended up scrapping it for simplicity's sake.
- Thought about having it work somehow with Shillelagh, but you need oak for that, and honestly mahogany is just **way** fancier.
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THANK YOU EVERYONE. I thought I really shot myself in the foot, but I am humbled that you liked this one. I really, REALLY promise to give it my all this year.
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More on that mistake:
Ehehe. Oops.
The real tragedy is that I had "Strength" check all the way up until the final iteration, then I patted myself on the back for catching that "omission" of Athletics. Argh.
Some things on my radar for the rewrite (I'll post it after work):
- General tightening up.
- Price adjustment (this is a tad cheap)
- Possible spell change (Plant Growth might not work if this is a dead log...)
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Neil, no slacking! We need some more juicy taunts to help us last for the next... 17.5 hours!
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I accept your apology... IF you agree to have the judges post vague taunting jibes about the top 32 for the next 22 hours. :3
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I think that for me personally this has been the most enjoyable season yet. You're all great to talk to and worry with.
Folks in the culled group: Do not fret. Please stick around, enjoy the contest, and learn for next year!
Those who survived: Right now we are all schrödinger's cat. At this moment, we've all both supped the sweet air of victory and eaten bitter humble pie. Both are equally likely at this point, so remember how they taste. :)
Chris Shaeffer
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The colors are actually for easy visual reference:
- Green: seen today
- Yellow: seen yesterday
- Gray or white: seen earlier
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This year, I am pretty streamlined:
1) Read the title and description block, ignore everything else.
2) Is it both easy to understand and evocative? Or instead am I getting inexplicably frustrated and having to re-read it several times? Is it a cool idea? Is it easy for the player and GM to implement in-game? Go with my gut.
3) If it's a tie, use the stuff I ignored earlier as a tie-breaker.
Point being:
You can teach the formatting and finer details. It's harder to find cool ideas, clear yet evocative writing, and solid mechanical understanding.
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I hope the judges comment on the top 100, actually. That'd be nice. :3
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Okie dokie, thank you for the clarification then! :)
Chris Shaeffer
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Hi Owen, I just want to reiterate my question from the other day:
Chris Shaeffer wrote:
I glanced through previous questions, but didn't see this one. Let me know if I am being redundant.
The rules calls for a 24x30 grid and for 72 ppi, and says that translates to 1728 x 2160. What it doesn't say is that that is the strict maximum size allowed for the image itself.
My question is: Are we allowed to leave a little breathing room around the sides to keep the grid from going right up to the edge of the image? Just for visual purposes, really.
Chris Shaeffer
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I glanced through previous questions, but didn't see this one. Let me know if I am being redundant.
The rules calls for a 24x30 grid and for 72 ppi, and says that translates to 1728 x 2160. What it doesn't say is that that is the strict maximum size allowed for the image itself.
My question is: Are we allowed to leave a little breathing room around the sides to keep the grid from going right up to the edge of the image? Just for visual purposes, really.
Chris Shaeffer
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Well, it looks like there is a consistent ~82% retention rate on each cull after the first. If there are one or two more culls we should end up with 250 or 205, respectively.
Chris Shaeffer
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Still alive...
Come on my dear, deeply flawed, helpless little item. Let your charm shine through and keep on running towards that light!
Chris Shaeffer
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Thanks! Missed that on the first couple read-throughs. :p
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Exciting! I'll start drawing tonight. Just in case...
In what way do we submit the 50-word descriptive text?
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Yes, item. Feast on the remains of your fallen brethren. Grow big and fat and strong... >:3
Chris Shaeffer
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I'm expecting there to be about 300-350 after this cull, guesstimating an 80% retention rate each time.
That means everyone left has about a 10% chance of being in the top 32!
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Hah! I had a "feel it in me bones" sort of thing going on yesterday, but was puzzled when no cull was announced.
Chris Shaeffer
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Okay everyone. I'm actually being serious when I say we should deep six this line of conversation.
Chris Shaeffer
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Dear pretty shield. I love your ease of use and lack of abstraction. Your mechanic shows the elegance that comes along with not using numbers all willy-nilly.
Chris Shaeffer
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Whale sea weather oar knot this wheel conch-inue...
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I hear Dieben is wanted across three planes of existence for a hefty reward of 2 gp.
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I've got a cough and fever, I think I feel a "culled" coming on later today... :3
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I thought that the number of items had been reduced again, but then I realized it was nautical.
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I regret going to a different place for lunch today, because they had...
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Okay, I'm going to post my first snark:
Designers, stop saying that your item "appears" to look like what it is. It seriously weakens the impact you are trying to create. Instead of "This blade appears to be slimy" say "A glistening ooze sloughs thickly from the surface of this blade".
Furthermore, stop relying on visual description alone! We have at least four other senses to titillate that most items barely cover. A tactile or auditory description can be really powerful.
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Thomas LeBlanc wrote:
Starting the day off with an item over word count, submitting at 300 words is just dangerous!
I think every one of my entries has been at or within 5 words of 300. Just can't help myself. :p
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Phew! Still haven't seen my item, but it looks like it's still rolling around in there.
How many culls are they doing in total? Worry worry... -_-;
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I regret not proposing to the love of my life... Nora Gretzky.
Chris Shaeffer
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Chris Shaeffer
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Chris Shaeffer
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Phew! Survived after all. The roller coaster never gets easier, folks!
Chris Shaeffer
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I made a pretty silly (but possibly DQ-worthy) mistake, so I'm thinking I got DQ'd. :p
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The snark is strong this year. You people are drunk with power! Drunk, I say!