Promethean playable race

[Shadowmancer777]

Here's a recent playable race I've been working on recently, keep in mind, this is a pretty rough draft and i'm mostly looking for input and critique. If anyone would like to play-test this at any time, i wholeheartedly approve and ask only that you submit feedback on your experience so I can continue to work on this literal and figurative Frankenstein project. I do have plans in the future to add more feats, race specific gear, archetypes, and more. Let me know what you think!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EKaOM9w_AA0yrnA4WrG1tAwllAVcQEkSvAwm-Y7 EyeE/edit?usp=sharing

[Bohdan Maksymenko]

The file doesnt exist, or the link is broken, i suggest checking how to format the link in the spoiler below the input box.

I'd really like to give feedback, but i cant. Please fix the link.

[VRMH]

Link.

[Bohdan Maksymenko]

Pretty nice race, good design, througth some of the subtypes that can be aquired througth alternate racial traits are a bit OP. I think you need to at least calculate their approximate RP.

[Shadowmancer777]

I'll certainly make an attempt, but I don't have much to compare with on the Create a New Race page. I thought about pushing it into a feat, either forcing the character wanting it to take it at level 1, or later. Would it be wise to make the Temporary Graft feat require 5 ranks of Heal, since it can provide Fly in the right circumstances?

[Bwang]

I use the first feat Elves get to define their 'sub-type', that might solve your issues.