I wanted to try a new exercise when we started this and decided to have my character write about her adventures. If anyone is interested it can be found here.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CwsqK5uulUu0DXHo5RHI5ztIKznsMyw3R_KCx9L Jo_g/edit
Please be kind, I realized when I started this since I haven't been in school since the early 90's just how much my writing skills and connection to things like grammar had atrophied. I got a friend to help me Edit it but there are probably still some weak points in the writing. Especially chapter 4.
Im taking an English upgrade course in September but I hope people enjoy this and that it is not too hard to read.
It only covers the frst book of the AP so far.
sorry the link isn't working for me.
Meh a little bit was cut off the end lets see.
this should work previewed and tested it. and double checked the sharing.
Hrm, was expecting a little more interest. I hope it wasn't too long.
Thank you, Really i started this as a project to improve my roleplaying. I found that due to social skills alot of the stuff in my head doesnt always get expressed properly. Writing about it was a way to get around this and for my group it appeared to work.
I haven't had the time to read it yet, but I will get to it this weekend.
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Started it, it's a little choppy, but nothing a little editing couldn't fix. I think it is engaging and will continue to read it after work today and this weekend. I just started the first section. I was reading the dramatis personae and about Junko. I like that you tied in your old RotRL characters.
I am not sure but I think that the year should be 4712, so RotRL took place around 4707. In PFS the current year is 4712. I have not really looked into what date that Burnt Offerings took place in...
Anyway, I look forward to finishing it! If you would like some editing help, give me commenting rights and I will help out with what I can...
Well am taking an english upgrade course in september so I will likely re a dress stuff during or after that class. I also received help from a co worker who got out of school more within the current millennium.this has been a very good mental exercise for me. I'm finding in the second book writ ng out what has happened has helped a great deal for understanding what has happened.
Some of the choppiness is deliberate. I was trying to express the views of someone who has 18 into 8 wisdom so she has a mixture of add with some focused attention issues depending on how much specific stuff interests her.
Also realized given all the anti ameiko threads I guess its odd I made the card carrying founding president of the ameiko for empress fan club.
Hi Adventures and welcome to the Jade Regent,
we recently started playing this adventure path and I decided to capture the story, as it unfolds for our party, in an adventure blog. First episode - the initial visit to Brimestump Swamp - has been finished. New episodes will be added on a bi-weekly schedule. Enjoy reading: Jade Regent 2024 - An adventure journey