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Okay guys, here is my comprehensive take on races:
Dwarves
- Hatred is too simple a term, and will get confusing as other races have variants. Call it Dwarf Foebane, or the like.
Elves
- unnatural beauty should go. Diplomacy as written is currently broken, and an Elven diplomat pushes it too far. You could replace this with a +2 racial bonus to Diplomacy, though.
Gnomes
- As above with dwarves, Hatred is too simple a term, and will get confusing as other races have variants. Call it Gnome Foebane, or the like.
Half-Orc
- Orc Ferocity needs work. How about giving half-orcs the "Hardy Half-Breed" trait, where they gain +2 hit points over and above everyone else? If you want to make it more extreme, you could grant Half-Orcs Diehard as a bonus feat (but that might be taking it too far).
Halflings
- hey! You took away or omitted their racial bonus to attack with thrown weapons and slings. Any reason?
- Fearless isn't a great name, because they aren't fearless, they just are resistant to fear effects. How about renaming it "Foolhardy", or the like?
Overall, those are my only quibbles with the races. I have adapted 90% of what you have included here.