Just a few things I noticed during my read through of the core book. I understand I may have misinterpreted or overlooked some things so I would appreciate any feedback if I misunderstood something or if it’s clarified elsewhere.
Page 37
Can Natural Ambition be used to gain a class feat for a class for which you have dedication feats for?
Page 89
For the double slice feat it says you make one strike with two weapons, each at your current multiple attack penalty. This is slightly confusing. Does it mean that both strikes are made at the same multiple attack penalty, so if you had not made any attacks yet that round they would be made at no penalty? Or is the first strike made at the current multiple attack penalty, which then gives another -5 to the second strike?
Page 91
For twin parry shouldn’t it read “if either weapon is agile”? Why would agile prevent the parrying action? If anything it seems like it should assist in the process?
Page 131
If you take dangerous sorcery and cast magic missile as a 5th level spell would you add 5 damage to each missile you create?
Page 281-282
In the Erinyes Blood feat section it says “While you’re taking persistent bleed damage, you gain a +2 conditional bonus to damage rolls and become accelerated 10. Whenever you take slashing or piercing damage, as a free action you can also take persistent bleed damage equal to the number of damage dice you took.” If this persistent damage is slashing damage and it’s reduced by the Scars feat on page 281 such that she would take 0 damage does she still gain the benefits of the Erinyes blood feat? This needs specific clarification for this interaction.
Just a small nitpick about the Rogue Multiclassing options. It seems rather underpowered compared to the cleric or wizard for example. The rogue dedication only allows you to get 1d6 extra sneak attack damage (without even an extra feat for possible advancement) while the cleric/wizard get a ton of extra spells. It just seems unbalanced and not worth losing a class feat for. Perhaps full progression would be too powerful, but half would I think be the sweet spot.