Thanks John, you are a scholar and a gentleman.
I hope people enjoy the stories.
So they are that bad?
Sorry...that was my total lack of confidence in my writing speaking...
No, I just had to get ready for work at the time, and wasn't able to read them. I'll give them a once-over later in the morning. Should I act as a proofreader for you?So they are that bad?
Sorry...that was my total lack of confidence in my writing speaking...
I know I was half joking due to nerves about releasing something I wrote.
|
Okay, JK. I've posted your stories here as spoilered text, as requested.
** spoiler omitted **...
Interesting :3
(I hates Cheliax! I does! I does!)
One thing I would recommend is watching how you describe things so you don't slip back and forth with present and past tense.
My apologies for taking so long, Kretz *hugs*
That's cause that's exactly what it is.Almost sounds like an Imperial
(I hates Cheliax! I does! I does!)
Re-education PrisonPsychiatric Hospital.
I prefer Cheliax over the Worldwound by a LARGE margin...
...there is nothing left to ruin in the Worldwound.
>:)
| 1 person marked this as a favorite. |
I prefer Cheliax over the Worldwound by a LARGE margin...
...there is nothing left to ruin in the Worldwound.
>:)
Pfffft! Silly gremlin, you lack imagination!
Okay, JK. I've posted your stories here as spoilered text, as requested.
** spoiler omitted **...
Interesting :3
(I hates Cheliax! I does! I does!)
One thing I would recommend is watching how you describe things so you don't slip back and forth with present and past tense.
My apologies for taking so long, Kretz *hugs*
I love to hate Cheliax...it is fun Evil Empire.
Yeah that is my major blind spot when writting...I even miss it when I am proofreading my own stuff. I need more practice I guess.
No worries about taking too long...I was nervous thus impatient. *hugs*
That's cause that's exactly what it is.Almost sounds like an Imperial
(I hates Cheliax! I does! I does!)
Re-education PrisonPsychiatric Hospital.
That is exactly what I was going for. Actually I kinda created a minor order of Hellknight who fight against the 'chaos' of mental instability. Unfortunately some of the things they deem as mental unstability is not.
Both stories are kinda easily expanded into larger stories...if people want more...it is not like I am ever going to get them published anyway.
Sure, and you never know, the developers do read the boards :3
Okay...what do you think of the other one?
| 2 people marked this as a favorite. |
Pfffft! Silly gremlin, you lack imagination!I prefer Cheliax over the Worldwound by a LARGE margin...
...there is nothing left to ruin in the Worldwound.
>:)
My imagination is checked by my survival instinct. One succubus is more than enough to handle, thank you very much! :p
Interesting, if a bit hectic.Sure, and you never know, the developers do read the boards :3Okay...what do you think of the other one?
Yeah...it was kinda meant to be bit hectic..,as I wrote from a first person pov. Was it too much?
Pfffft! Silly gremlin, you lack imagination!My imagination is checked by my survival instinct. One succubus is more than enough to handle, thank you very much! :p
Sir Vital Instinct?!
NEVER MET HIM.
|
|
Yeah...it was kinda meant to be bit hectic..,as I wrote from a first person pov. Was it too much?Interesting, if a bit hectic.Sure, and you never know, the developers do read the boards :3Okay...what do you think of the other one?
In that little snippet all by itself yeah, but if more of the story was revealed to spread it out so it didn't all hit you at once it wouldn't be a problem.
| 2 people marked this as a favorite. |
>.>
<.<
♪♫ Happy Feet! ♪♫
♪♫ I've got those hap-hap-happy feet! ♪♫
♪♫ Give them a low-down beat, ♪♫
♪♫ And they begin dancing! ♪♫
♪♫ I've got those ♪♫
♪♫ Ten little tip-tap-tapping toes, ♪♫
♪♫ When they hear a tune, ♪♫
♪♫ I can't control the dancing, dear, ♪♫
♪♫ To save my soul! ♪♫
♪♫ Those weary blues, ♪♫
♪♫ Can't get into my shoes, ♪♫
♪♫ Because my shoes refuse, ♪♫
♪♫ To ever grow weary. ♪♫
♪♫ I keep cheerful, ♪♫
♪♫ On an earful, ♪♫
♪♫ Of music sweet; ♪♫
♪♫ Just got those hap-hap-happy feet! ♪♫
<.<
>.>
| 2 people marked this as a favorite. |
... WHERE DID YOU GET THE ADORABLE SQUISHIES?!?!
Gary the Grimple Gremlin had them in stock and they were eating him out of house and home so I took them off his hands in lieu of payment for some mangy rats I received two Christmases ago.
If you want more, I'm sure he still has the supplier in his files.
|
|
... WHERE DID YOU GET THE ADORABLE SQUISHIES?!?!Gary the Grimple Gremlin had them in stock and they were eating him out of house and home so I took them off his hands in lieu of payment for some mangy rats I received two Christmases ago.
If you want more, I'm sure he still has the supplier in his files.
Preciate it, Wumpums ^w^
| 2 people marked this as a favorite. |
Pfffft! Silly gremlin, you lack imagination!My imagination is checked by my survival instinct. One succubus is more than enough to handle, thank you very much! :pSir Vital Instinct?!
NEVER MET HIM.
{finally extricates head from bulk-sized peanut butter jar} Freedom! I thought Sir Vital officially Fell, and then he renamed himself Leeroy Jenkins, Blackguard, LLC?
I think I was running low on air in that jar. I was hallucinating the sound of tap-dancing.
Hey Rysky, get your downloads yet? 'Cuz I just got mine! :D
Wanted to share impressions, not mocking!
| 2 people marked this as a favorite. |
Well, maybe a little mocking...
| 3 people marked this as a favorite. |
Very much!
There are hints with one monster in Bestiary 6(the Conqueror Worm) that the events in Galt are not just a random rolling of continual revolution but an act of perverse destruction from a colossal aberration. I was thinking along the same lines, but had a vague idea for a daemon. Very cool!
Crystal's intro to Assault on Longshadow is a MUST READ. She talks about resistance to persecution and makes it clear—without any overt statements—how it relates to the current...er...political climate within the US. Amazing stuff.
And Heroes of the Darklands has a vigilante archetype (the Darklantern) that could be the basis of an entire Drow city intrigue campaign.
And all that from quick first perusals! :D
| 2 people marked this as a favorite. |
Greetings playful and seductive Mistress,
Just dropped to wish you a Happy Easter.
*hugs*
| 3 people marked this as a favorite. |
I don't know anything about that halfling comic.
I feel like nobody properly appreciated me getting inspiration for my first PFS character from the sorts of things we discuss in this thread. (And a paladin of Shelyn, no less!)
I'm very disappointed in you all. Very disappointed.
| 1 person marked this as a favorite. |
Oh! I thought no one was around....
...er...Happy Easter!
|
|
| 2 people marked this as a favorite. |
I don't know anything about that halfling comic.I feel like nobody properly appreciated me getting inspiration for my first PFS character from the sorts of things we discuss in this thread. (And a paladin of Shelyn, no less!)
I'm very disappointed in you all. Very disappointed.
Hey, I arched a brow at those italics!
| 1 person marked this as a favorite. |
Greeting wonderful and knowledgeable Mistress,
So I am ring to loose weight...what exercises would you suggest? Exercise I can do at home...
|
|
Greeting wonderful and knowledgeable Mistress,
So I am ring to loose weight...what exercises would you suggest? Exercise I can do at home...
Hmm, I'd say try a bunch to see what you like and are comfortable with.
My favourite core exercise is Bicycles, but a lot of people don't like them. Whereas the same people like push-ups but I hate those. For bicycles you don't have to have your elbow and knee touch all the way, it's the motion that's important.
And then you have fun stuff like jumping jacks. And not so fun but highly effective stuff like lunges.
But if everyone knows martial arts then doesn't that just keep everyone on the same footing.
| 1 person marked this as a favorite. |
It's also a great way to both lose weight and gain strength without gaining bulk as it develops lean muscle.