Hi all
I posted this link in the RPG Superstar Practice thread and thought some of the more general community might be interested, so I am posting here too.
I am trying to work on my visuals and writing style before the next season of the RPG Superstar competition, so thought it might be nice to solicit feedback from the community at large, because it is for you all that I hope to write for one day.
Please, if you have some time, have a look at the first few chapters of a novel I am attempting to write where I am playing with the power of dreams as an alternative to illusory magic.
It's on google docs, and is open for public comments in line in the document - just highlight the text you wish to comment on and add your comments.
All feedback will be treasured and learnt from.
Many thanks in advance for all your kind time and attention.
Anthony.