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Hi all:
I've been writing a first-level adventure set in Osirion as a prelude for Tomb of Pharaohs. I think there is a need for more adventures on such an exciting setting so I wrote my own take on it.
I'm currently playtesting it with my local group but since we're not able to play very often, I'm looking for constructive criticism. I focused more on the social aspect of the game rather than combat and strategy (but don't be confused, there is tough combat there!).
Also, I'm not sure about the licensing thing. I don't intend to charge people for it so I'm leaving it as "community use" license. Not sure how that works, I haven't seen any adventure on those terms.
Any feedback is welcome. I really appreciate any and all constructive criticism.
You can download it for free here
Thanks to all!
I haven't had time to read it all yet, but at a glance it loosk interesting and I am impressed by the quality and style of your maps!
Reading full-page width text is a little hard on the eyes at times, so I would perhaps suggest re-editing to a two-column text layout, but that could just be a personal preference of mine. Better hear what others say as well before you decide :-)
If you're setting it in our campaign setting, the Community Use Policy is the correct license to use, and it cannot be sold for money.