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making an item for a 20th level campaign, tried to follow the magic item rules but I'm not horribly handy with them.
Over priced? Too powerful?
Anyway Id like some feedback if you guys would be so kind.
Fluff:
Wings of the Iron Angel CL 20 200,000 GP
A cloak made of thousands of feathers each one made of a type or shade of metal on command the cloak transforms into a pair of wings composed of iron feathers, a cloud of loose feathers swirling around the wearer granting a 20% miss chance but not impeding her vision in any way. The wings grant a +5 resistance bonus to all saves and can store objects inside it in the same manner as an Efficient quiver.
Crunch: (tried to follow the basic rules of the magic item part)
wings of flying 56,000
Cloak of resistance 25,000 +12500
Cloak of minor displacement 24,000+1200
Efficient quiver 1800 +900
132,200
+66,100 (50% price increase, (reason: Slot Value))
198,300 total
(round up to 200,000 because I can't much think of anything else flavorful to tack onto this)

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making an item for a 20th level campaign, tried to follow the magic item rules but I'm not horribly handy with them.
Over priced? Too powerful?
Anyway Id like some feedback if you guys would be so kind.Fluff:
Wings of the Iron Angel CL 20 200,000 GP
A cloak made of thousands of feathers each one made of a type or shade of metal on command the cloak transforms into a pair of wings composed of iron feathers, a cloud of loose feathers swirling around the wearer granting a 20% miss chance but not impeding her vision in any way. The wings grant a +5 resistance bonus to all saves and can store objects inside it in the same manner as an Efficient quiver.Crunch: (tried to follow the basic rules of the magic item part)
wings of flying 56,000
Cloak of resistance 25,000 +12500
Cloak of minor displacement 24,000+1200
Efficient quiver 1800 +900
132,200
+66,100 (50% price increase, (reason: Slot Value))
198,300 total
(round up to 200,000 because I can't much think of anything else flavorful to tack onto this)
Honeslty magic items like this are a case of "ask your GM" he/she is the only person who know how this might effect the game your playing
price looks like you calculated it correctly