| R Sanderson |
On page 36, in the Ranger class section, the Combat Style Feats list "Careful Targeting" and "Exact Targeting", which are absent from the Feats section or the web enhancement material. Perhaps these should be replaced with Improved Precise Shot and Far Shot (only ranged attack feats missing from the lists).
On page 39, in the Rogue class section, Table 4-11 lists both "Advanced Talent" and "Rogue Talent" for level 10, giving the impression that you get both an Advanced talent and a Rogue talent. Perhaps a better method would be to have levels 10, 12, 14, 16, 18, and 20 say "Advanced rogue talent" if you only get one new talent at each even level, or "Advanced talent and rogue talent" if you get one of each.
On page 111, in the Armor equipment section, Table 7-7 indicates that "Small" armor for "Humanoid" creatures weighs the same as Medium, but costs 1/2 as much. However, Table 7-6 indicates (in footnote #1) that armor for Small creatures weighs 1/2 as much as the same armor for Medium creatures, with no indication of a difference in price.
Also, in the campaign materials that my GM has, he got a large map of Inner Sea "Reigon". I'm guessing that was supposed to be "Region".
Very impressive materials on the whole though! I like the changes to racial bonuses and skills especially!