•It's cool to see a dwarf groomed to lead rather than doing all the bashing and cleaving himself.
glad you like it - I think it'll be fun to play the guy who SHOULD be leading but almost doesn't want to.....
•Backstory is easy to read, but a bit bare on the details. Who are the oracles and what did they predict? Who were his men?
will flesh it out over the weekend - ideas are in the brain, just have to drag them out.
•There's a good outline here, enough to get an impression, but not a lot of specific details to really nail down the character.
His personality is definitely a bit of a work in progress...I want to try and balance the line between taking charge and suddenly mid-decision start second guessing himself. Ultimately I want him to have the capacity to become a gret leader but at the beginning of the career his biggest obstacle is him own self doubt.
•I'm not sure Talthon qualifies for Ferocious Loyalty -- it seems to be restricted to werebears and their ilk.
thought I asked if it was OK to take that, my bad if I forgot to do that. I really like that feat, wanna give him a werebear bite?
no? OK, I'll grab another one and include that change in my update this weekend.