Gaston Cromarchy

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RPG Superstar 9 Season Marathon Voter. Organized Play Member. 63 posts. No reviews. No lists. No wishlists. 1 Organized Play character.



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I've been holding off on getting some of the recent books, but I would absolutely throw some money at Paizo if they voluntarily recognize the union, it would feel nice to buy games from a union shop for a change.

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Jacob W. Michaels wrote:

I suppose I'd like to hear people's thoughts on my item. I fought with it a lot -- pricing, different delivery methods, etc. -- so I can't say I'm shocked it didn't make it to the Top 32.

Anathema Brand

I'm honestly a little shocked that this didn't make it into the top 32. The execution was a little ponderous, but the idea was solid and the mechanics were excellent. I must have voted for this a dozen times or more.

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Einhänder wrote:
Murder Candle

I think maybe people might have thought this was a joke (personally, I think Murder Candle is perfect, but you could have gone with something a little less on-the-nose), but I loved it.

My PCs are definitely going to have some run ins with a few of these.

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Papasteve08 wrote:
Cloak of Nine Lives

As I mentioned via PM, I thought this was fantastic. This was definitely Top 32 material, though you may have been hurt by the quality of cloak competition.

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I don't have time for a detailed critique (I should be working on my map or, since I'm at work, working) but I wanted to say that I LOVED the Wing of the Night Monarch and Vudrani Fighting Rope and voted for both every time. I was disappointed not to see them in the final 32!

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Lucky Pips wrote:

First off, congrats! I am immensely happy to see your item receive some credit for being so wonderful, even if I don't get the chance to see your map entry. This was a personal favorite of mine. It was a bit flawed, but in a lovable way.

Here were my thoughts about your item back when I had to be vague.

Lucky Pips wrote:

Item, you are my favorite. Your imagery is straight up cartoon villains from my childhood, you drip mojo, you use a completely unique mundane item as your basis, you are one of the few magic items I would alter my character art to show. Heck I want to repaint my mini to show you. I will even get a mundane version before I can afford you so my teammates won't even notice the difference...

However, you made up a new aura strength, you incorrectly filled in your slot info, and your price appears too cheap (by about half). Basically your header is a mess (besides name, which I also love) and the body is Superstar quality. Because of this, I find myself voting against you half the time to decent items that nail the CL, Aura and Price. I hope you pull through, but I'm not really helping you towards that goal as much as I would like. Work on your headers, and hand them to your friendly local rules lawyer to pick them apart before your next submission (we work for very reasonable retainers). Best of luck.

Hey Pips, thanks so much for the feedback, I thought that might have been about my item!

Everything you said is absolutely correct -- I changed the aura strength last minute and forgot to double check the phrasing (I was agonizing about it all week).

In my defense about the slot though, I was comparing it to a Feather Token, so there is SOME precedent for a dash, though I am noticing now that most slotless items say "None" instead.

This is all high praise though, and legitimate criticism. You can all rest assured that next year's entry will be FLAWLESS.

(Seriously, it will, I can't handle a week of stressing about minor errors. I must have shaved a month off my life).

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I loved the mechanics and imagery of this item! I normally don't vote for anything this expensive, but the cost is justified and it's such a cool item. Well done.

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Um, are alternates allowed in here?

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At this point I'm pretty sure we're all a part of some mad psychology experiment. There is no prize. There is no Paizo. What is real?

Nine is real. Only nine.

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I mean, I'm fine with them moving the date, do what you gotta do, but did they have to wait until the exact minute that we were expecting to see the winners? I just about chewed through my fingernails here.

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I hope that this doesn't upset anyone, but I'm a lot less mechanistic than some other voters have indicated they are.

I tend to look for "mojo" -- an item that feels awesome, has flair, or drama, or panache, something that makes it stand out.

I also privilege good writing over almost anything else. Formatting is important too, blocks of text are hard on my eyes (and brain).

Issues like costs and balance are usually the last thing I consider, unless they're especially egregious, though that kind of thing often ends up being a tiebreaker. I almost always vote for the cheaper item, and rarely anything over 50k.

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Don't you know? It's always been Season 9.

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Brigg wrote:
The Raven Black wrote:

Greenwood vs Greenwood o-O What are the odds ?

SUUPAAAAAHH GREEEEEENN

Just the the SUPER-GREEN GEMINI CROQUET CONTEST! YOU WIN A TRIP FOR 2 TO PHLOSTON PAAARAADDDIIIISSSSEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!

I rigged the contest so you can save the world, by the way. <.<

*runs*

CORBEN? CORBEN?


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A level 1 Strix anything can stymie a T-Rex, because dinosaurs can't fly.

Where my Strix nerf?

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Ok, which of you guys are torturing your players with incorporeal undead? Every other item is some kind of ghost slaying/trapping/banishing doohickey.

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Guys, I roll dice all the time for this game, don't make me roll more dice when I use my items.

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Erick Wilson wrote:
Papasteve08 wrote:


Just keep in mind that the winner of this contest writes a module - Would you prefer your new author to have rich, innovative ideas with cool themes? or one who can nail the mechanics?

Editors can help with mechanics. Give me the good writer anyday. My preference is to vote for the good idea, execution being far less important (but not something to ignore)

Totally disagree. To be honest, the idea behind a module is not that important, much like the plot of a kung fu movie is not that important. It just needs to be strong enough to do its job and enable adventuring.

A workmanlike module with well constructed encounters, wherein the writer has clearly visualized how things are going to play out pragmatically, is very much preferable to some high concept mess with neat ideas but boring/easy encounters and/or baffling mechanics. In my opinion, Paizo currently has far too many of the latter type of mod, due to the predominance of opinions like the one papasteve just related.

Edit: I submit, as examples of what I am talking about, Quest for Perfection Part I (which I thought was excellent) vs. Quest for Perfection Part III (a high concept mess where the mechanics hadn't been tightened up enough).

Edit 2: In other words, when in doubt I favor solid mechanics in an item over a vivid idea. The solid mechanical item would have to be very humdrum, and the poorly designed item extremely evocative, for me to go the other way.

I agree 100%.

Whether you're writing a novel or a Pathfinder module, execution is far more important than concept.

Good ideas are a dime a dozen. Fully-realized, well-edited, concrete realizations of them are very rare.


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Imbicatus wrote:
Remove anything that requires combat expertise. It the worst tax in the game. There are new ways around it, but it's still annoying as hell.

Enthusiastically seconded. It's needlessly punishing to martials who want to do something interesting.

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What, exactly, is 'abduration'...?

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Heaven vs. Hell!

Sorry Satan, Heaven's formatting is better.

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Scallywag’s Tooth
Aura Minor Transmutation; CL 1st
Slot —; Price 1200 gp; Weight
Description

This is a simple golden crown, the kind used to cap damaged teeth -- it does not appear remarkable at first glance, but close inspection reveals a set of very small scratches on the back of the crown that exude a faint magic aura. The tooth also bears an imprint from a previous owner, that of a blunted incisor.

When affixed to a person’s tooth, the bearer gains the ability to lie casually and effortlessly -- lies and misdirection seem to just slip off of her tongue. As long as the Scallywag’s Tooth is worn and visible in the mouth, it functions as a set of masterwork tools for the Bluff and Diplomacy Skills, granting a +2 Circumstance bonus on all relevant checks.

Once per day, by smiling widely, the bearer of the tooth can reroll a failed Bluff or Diplomacy check -- she must take the result of the reroll, even if it is lower than the original. The subject of the failed roll must be looking at the bearer and be able to see the Scallywag’s Tooth for this effect to function.

Construction
Requirements Craft Wondrous Item, innocence Cost 600 gp


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I agree, talking about tone is unproductive.

It's even got its own RationalWiki entry!


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It's not really optimal, but there is some interesting synergy between the kineticist and the Scarred Witch Doctor.

Oh wait...